Hell... oh god. This is good man, well written, dramatic on the good bits. Wonderful to no end. I think it is finished already, but if you're planning on keep writing, do you think you could make one for fettel? The guy was used both by the father as by alma, to set her wrath on the world. I think he was the one who suffered more, he keeps suffering and I like how he likes the Point Man even so, even with him shooting him. Fettel is awesome.