Cuties.

Little by little I'm getting used to the difficult words you've used, because I know this story is good so I tried to understand it, although English is not my language. But I really like this couple and I love your story ;))

Very well written , liked it a lot, thanks

This is sooo good, it fits them very well. I hope for more great LuNa story from you

Lovely story! I've read this a couple of times but never get tired of it. The ending is awesome lol xD

Just reading the end, loving the story then I read writing smut storeys while eating diner I laughed so very hard at that great story.

Oh my god, I had to laugh because that last line was so unabashedly Luffy. It was a good piece and they seemed very in character, grown up, but still in character.

this was a great one luna one shot :D love the lemon

Oh my. Kitties are causing so many problems! But kitty is super cute, so it's ok.

THIS... IS... AWESOME! *cue Leonidas* XD I loved it. 3 Your writing... it's beautiful. ;_;

I read this once, then had to go back for a re-read the next day! I'm usually not too fond of AU's but i love this so much. It fits them really well, and i feel they we're totally in character. I love how you write LuNa also Luffy playing with a kitty is jus ehe lovely job .

Oh trust me , you have reason to be proud of yourself . Also love the ending .

I love your writing. A wonderful job: lots of smut to please the fans but there's also plot and thought process between the characters as well. AU Luffy sounds sooooooo adorable too. .

Thanxs! :) :p ;)

Well you're great, as always, and this is just as good :)

Hiii
I didn't have anything to do by 12:30, so reading fanfics while not half asleep it was!

I really enjoyed Kiss of an Angel and I'm glad this was a "kind of" continuation of that fic. I do like modern AU One Piece, hehe. It kind of felt like you were stuffing a lot into just one fic, but since it's a oneshot, it's understandable.

I didn't notice anything strange grammatically. It flowed well enough. Oh, but this part:

""…condom," she spoke up then, her hand coming up to caress his face. "Put it on first. Then you can mess me up any way you wish."
"

It felt like an advertisement for safe sex hahaha. It made me laugh. I also thought it was interesting how Nami mused about how she heard losing her virginity would be painful or so. She just seemed very experience and confident with her body, hehe.

"Nami quickly decided that she very much liked having him completely under her tender mercy." This line was also very Nami to me, haha. Poor dense Luffy; he didn't see it coming at all. Nami's actions reminds me of Film Z and how she left the voice note to the crew. Only Luffy didn't hear the entire message! Haha.

Oh! And Mikan means tangerine right? Because Bellemére's tangerines? c: