Reviews for Cold As Ice |
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Demi clayton chapter 1 . 11/18/2019 I think you should write more, when you can as it is really good so for, yet sweet, please and thank you. |
No one important chapter 1 . 11/22/2015 Try what I call "broken sentences". They have better effect when emphasizing pain, hopelessness, and depression. Here (from my own writing); "...She was chained. Poisoned. Crying. Dying." (is that how I wrote it?) It adds effect. Think of it as poetry, not prose. I am not saying this is the right way to write (see what I did there? XD) but, it is what works for me. Cuz I suck at writing prose unless I incorporate poetry somehow. -_- Anyway... nice story! to thumbs up! U (does that even look like a smiley face) |
user72042 chapter 1 . 10/21/2015 Dream within a dream, hmm . . . I've just read this and, obviously, couldn't resist favoriting. Great way of mixing those heavy angsty feels followed by fluff in a happy ending; I actually liked how it was only a nightmare. :P Poor Jack. |
meddlesomedragon chapter 1 . 8/29/2014 I got teary eyed. This is so sad but then it gets happy so its good! |
Archer of the Eclipse chapter 1 . 8/27/2014 I did not laugh-cry, I simply started to bawl. |
Joshari chapter 1 . 5/29/2014 Whew, was starting to think that it was real. Like Jack, that none of it really happened. So glad that it was a nightmare |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/3/2014 You did make me cry. Not laugh/cry, but really cry. Then I smiled. |
YellowWeather chapter 1 . 1/26/2014 AWW |
Firenze Fox chapter 1 . 1/20/2014 Oh, no, you are very very good at making people cry, you made me cry, at any rate... Such an adorable story, I love it! Keep writing! |
jipseebree chapter 1 . 1/3/2014 Well, I teared up, i'll give you that! I love sad stories so this is one for the favirotes list! P.s. you're a great writer, much better than me. :) |
yuki100o chapter 1 . 8/20/2013 What do you mean a failed attempt?! I'm crying over here! Great story! I'm glad that it was only a nightmare but it was so sad... |
TheRealMerlin chapter 1 . 8/8/2013 failed? That, mo' Cherie (my darling), was AWESOME! SERIOUSLY. For something that's not your thing, you sure are amazing at it! |
DonkayBallz chapter 1 . 8/4/2013 AW that was so cute and sad at the same time! |
OinkyThePiggy chapter 1 . 7/26/2013 Not a fail, this is a tearjerker. Had me on the edge of my seat pleading for Jack. Great job! |
emo-foxkitten chapter 1 . 7/23/2013 Fuck that You totally made me cry my eyes out And I haven't even watched the movie. Great story made me cry on my birthday too...sniff |