Reviews for The Pit
neko-girl83 chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
i wish they actual did something with them in the book, and this made me happy
Crafter chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
This was frekin HOT! Hot as in spelt correctly hot. Hot as in, this aint the sun hot, but it's Malina hot. Mal and Alina are so great togeather. This fic was perf. You should SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO make this into a two shot. Please?
lemonie chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Loved it - very sensual... more please!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
Best Mal x Alina smut out there. You wrote it amazingly well!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
I really love this! I hope you write more Malina smut!
Kristen chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
-dies- so hot. oh. my. god.
Vindictev chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
LORD JESUS, YES. OMFG, THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS. MALINA SMUT IS MY FAVORITE, AND YOU JUST MADE MY MONTH WRITING THIS. ASDGJKHDSJ.