You know in the beginning I thought this was going to be kinda cheesy, but I like how Jack is very down to earth and a genuinely likable character.

My only critique is dont be afraid to change the plot and experiment with different plot devices. I'd be interested to see another character death or where a character lives.

Continue and update sophie have similiar mutation like jack .make sophie mutation become like this The media still made a huge noise about the new strain, driving a panic that hundreds of thousands could die, and the various national governments were failing their citizens by starving the medical profession of budgets. Several national governments lost no-confidence resolutions, and there were a rash of early elections.

The next indication that something was changing was on the stock market, but no-one understood what the sign meant. Companies dealing in clothing saw their business booming, and their stock prices reflected the pickup in sales, while dieting companies seemed to be in a terminal slump – many were going bankrupt through loss of their core markets. Stock analysts put this down as a result of the recent influenza outbreak – and they were right, but not for the reasons that they thought.
What made people sit up and really take notice was the strange case of Katrina Zdanowski, a pleasant young woman residing in Krakow.
Katrina was visiting her favourite beauty salon. Her manicurist exclaimed, "Katrina, you look fabulous! Have you lost weight?"
The young woman blushed happily. "Not really," she said. "I think I'm having a late growth spurt. I've grown five inches taller in the last month, but even better – I've gone down four dress sizes." She had been teased all through high school for being overweight, but now she looked more like a supermodel than one of the plump girls.
The manicurist looked at her enviously, but thought to herself that Katrina should get out in the sun more often. Her skin, always pale, had a distinct bluish tinge now. But it was not good customer relations to tell her clients negative messages about their appearance. So the two young women chatted about fashion, the last episode of Polish Idol, and an ever favourite topic – boys.
Katrina wasn't just taller, her fingers were longer as well, thought the manicurist, and her previously dull brown hair had reddish tints in it. It wasn't fair, thought the manicurist as she buffed the nail on Katrina's left little finger. Suddenly, the manicurist screamed in horror, and leapt up backwards, knocking her chair over.
"What's wrong?" asked Katrina, puzzled at the strange reaction.
Wordlessly, the manicurist pointed a shaking hand. Katrina's little finger, and the side of her left hand, had just peeled off, leaving fresh, new skin – pale blue skin. The discarded body part lay on the small work table, looking like a macabre novelty from a joke shop.
"Oh," said Katrina faintly. Her little fingers had been feeling numb for about a week, but she thought it had been a pinched nerve, or growing pains, or something. It was strange, though – her left hand felt normal, totally normal. She studied her right hand, grasped the little finger, and pulled it off as well – it felt just like peeling scabs off her knees when she was a child.
The young Polish woman looked up at the manicurist, who saw that Katrina's eyes were enormous in her face, and they weren't a muddy brown any longer, but gold.
"Y-you're an alien," she stammered. "You're one of th-them."
Katrina hissed at the manicurist, baring her teeth, showing a pair of distinctly longer canine teeth. "Don't be stupid, Ana," she snarled. "I went to school with your little sister."
"Get out! Get out!" screamed stormed out of the salon, into the crowds packing the mall. She was hungry, and her feet hurt – her shoes were so damned tight. Katrina went to the food court, and ordered five burgers. She had to eat something, otherwise she felt she would faint from hunger. While she was stuffing her face, she kicked off her shoes, not noticing that two of her toes were others were displaying the same symptoms. Walkers ignore them blue plague spread through blood in acident sophie blood contamine scraches on her .All of them were showing signs of infection of the blue turned into full-blooded Na'vi. (from james cameron avatar) after defead gouverner woodbury is turned into na'vi village rick leader carol become shaman (tsahìk) they all clanmembers trained shot by na'vi bows clean land around vilage and fortifi that.

Please please please please please please update soon! Also can jack get closer to carl and sophia? Please dont let sophia die in this. Also i think a good twist would be if jack got shot and not carl. U know change things up but still following the plot sorta. Mix it up a bit.

Love it more please

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Omg no way i love this so much 3

If Jack's immune, why doesn't she just look for Sophia during the night? The only reason the group didn't do so was because it ran the risk of stumbling into Walkers because of the dark.

Don't be afraid to change things. So far, this story just reads like a copy paste of the TV show script with Jack just adding her thoughts once in awhile or doing something that in no way effects the overall story (eg. Getting water and food for the group).

Have Jack change things that drastically change the story because that is the character you have created. Otherwise, her being "walker repellent" is pointless to the story.

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Really like this story so far. A little disappointed in Jenner, if there was even a possibility of recreating a cure from Jack he should have gone with the group. Looking forward to introducing the farm in this story. Maybe Hershall will be less hostile to start with when he learns about Jack's ability. Keep updating this story

Aww poor Carol and Sophia! :(
I'm wondering though will Jack's blood mutation do anything else different to Jacks DNA other than make her immune to possibly every disease?

I love it! I can't wait to see what happens next or see how jack and her immunity will affect the storylines. Hopefully there will more updates soon!

Update please

keep going

Secret revealed! Da da da dahm!

Cool man update soon!