Was checking for any update as I was about to reread the story but saw you have abandoned it. Too bad as the story deserved better.

If I had to take someone to the Yule Ball, it would have to be Luna Lovegood

I post this review in the 3 chapter but only because I already post one for the second and I forgot one ... Correction? in the last chapter ... Hadrian is a boy so it should be : mon chéri and not ma chérie . Ma chérie is for a girl :) (And mon chéri for a boy) If you have probleme with french sentences you can send me a private message... I would be plased to help you. :D
Imerys
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Hi :D I just want to tell you that yours French sentences are not quite right. ( Not to sure on how to right this sentence) I don’t want to offend you but you can’t say -Était-ce par ces ordres?- . this sentence would be impossible to place in a conversation because it is ... mal formulé? (Sorry I am French so I may have difficulty to ... You know what I mean! :P ) … So I think it may sound better like this : Est-ce lui qui nous la ordonner? And also – Je crains que nous ne reçoivent pas beaucoup de choix. – should be like this : Je crains que nous n’aillions pas vraiment le choix. :D

Well I’m sorry if my review may sound rude to you but I think that if it was me, I would have like it if somebody had take the time to correct my mistakes.
Bonne journée
Imerys
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Ps: If you wish to read more you should use Google translate or anything like it because I am tired to look for my words. Si jamais tu est entrain de lire ceci ses parce que tu a décider de le traduire en anglais. Bref... je voulais juste te dire que si mes phrases (En anglais) sont mal formuler c’est probablement parce que je suis, justement, Canadienne Française et que je parle donc français a longueur de journée. Et que si tu parle toi-même français je suis désoler de t’avoir fait passer pour une personne ne savant pas formuler ses phrases (Comme je le fait probablement en anglais) . Ensuite je suis désolé d’être probablement les trois mille deux centième personnes à corriger tes phrases. Et finalement j’espère que tu as bien compris la traduction car Google traduction ne traduit pas très bien… :)

Pps : J'ai essayer de ne pas trop changer la formulation de tes phrase et c'est ce que cela a donner.

Ppps: J’adore déjà ta fanfiction bonne chance avec la suite :D Et désoler pour le super long texte! ;p

Ooooooh... a mysterious mask! (*bored sigh*)

Love it and I really, really, really can't wait for more, also Hadrian's uncle is a absolutely stupid moron who I agree is being suicidal!

i love it

I love it when Nagini talks about grand hatchlings.

Tom's threats about snake-skin boots are quite funny.

Wonderful story overall. I found it a very interesting read. Tom and Willow are interesting. Alceid will likely end up dead.

I don't know how to spell the French schools name, but that would be the one I would want to go to, maybe Hogwarts after Harry's years. I do love huffulpuff (I think that's how it's spelled.) Write more soon! Can't wait! FIGHTING!

love the fic! c:
hadrian and draco ar so cute! and 1 for Nagini who else would dare to treaten the dark lord xD? I also love seeing Demitri playing politics at the ministry why do everyone to be so stupid? it's always like 'poor Dimitri he has to do everything himself for things to de welldone' so funny XD
a little suggestion! i would help if you add the translation just besides the original text for continuity because the option of just copying the text has been disabled

favorite pairing? of course that would hplv! it's my absolute one true pair! this is really interesting; i love stories where harry is raised as a pureblood and able to reach his full potential. on another note, i'm wondering if english is not your native language? there were quite a bit grammatical errors that kind of detracted the overall awesomeness of this fic. if you could find a beta to edit this i think this fic could be something wonderful!

I love your story. And to answer your question, I would to go with Fenrir Greyback. For some strange reason, I think he is the coolest Death Eater in the universe.

I really love the way this story have developed. And the surprise about sirius's child was omg. I would love to see where this story goes.

I can't wait to see Hadrian and Snape's first interaction. Love the story, always keep writing

Last Semester of Second Years, so that they could get an overall hands on Practical, of the other Courses offered to Third Years, so they could make better and more informed choices, instead of easy ones like Divination.