| Reviews for Harry's Un-Birthday Gift |
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Cassandra30 chapter 3 . 7/29 Entertaining story! |
Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 7/29 Excellent story! |
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 7/29 The movies would be available. Intriguing idea. |
Hank1967 chapter 3 . 6/4 Excellent story! Really enjoyed it! I like the responsible adults. Much better than in canon. Enjoyed the zany twist with Luna becoming a pet. That was out there! While I'm not a Harry/Padma fan, it was well done and enjoyable. I also like how you brought the new headmaster to Hogwarts. Bout time someone responsible was in charge of the kids. The Witch Doctor stuff was great, too. I liked the dynamic between the headmaster and the group of friends. Also liked the dynamic between Harry and all of his friends as well as Hermione's and the Patil sisters' parents. |
Jimbocous chapter 3 . 3/27 Thanks for a great read! This was very nicely done. |
Kira Potter Jackson chapter 3 . 1/13 Very interesting and original this story. Kira |
Matt chapter 2 . 12/3/2019 You apparently had no beta for this chapter. Headmaster Greengrass would have contacts in the Wizengamot, not contracts. And you continually spelled Hermione's name wrong. It's not spelled Hermoine. |
VashonBeader chapter 3 . 9/4/2019 Amazing. I was heart broken for a time, but that was in the moment. Very nice, very well done. Thanks so much for writing and sharing! |
VashonBeader chapter 2 . 9/4/2019 Superb job! Looking forward to the next chapter... |
VashonBeader chapter 1 . 9/4/2019 Another great story! Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks so much for writing and sharing. |
LtKettch chapter 3 . 8/20/2019 Very different but enjoyable story. I understand that the intent was a short story, so character development would be short and abrupt. However, I wasn’t quite sure where the Padma pairing came from. It seemed like Hermione or Luna seemed more likely. Luna’s characteristic as a dog was excellently done. Thanks for sharing. |
Khatix chapter 3 . 6/17/2019 In the end i see Luna staying with Harry/Padma fully recovers but stays with them and has a few children thru Harry and being a lover to them. |
Jake Crepeau chapter 2 . 5/15/2019 And it worked perfectly well. Since the Wizarding world is pretty much stuck in the Victorian era...well, I don't know what the custom was in England at the time, but I do know that in the US, the use of slang was strongly discouraged, and a few of the very high society types wouldn't use contractions, or even nicknames. (I had an aunt who, even in the 1960s, still followed that practice - and she was about as far from high society as you can get. Her daughters persist in it to this day, though her sons let it go.) |
arata7kasuga chapter 1 . 1/4/2019 The twins are being rather hypocritical are they not? It isn't like Harry set out to ruin their night or year or anything like that. That should not even translate to him mistreating Luna at all irregardless if it hurt their feelings. At the very least, Padma should have been smart enough to see the logic behind how the night went if anything. |
EdTheBeast chapter 3 . 1/2/2019 An excellent story. Due to the many Fics; a consort, second wife, a bond between them. Several things could work to get children for Luna. |