Wow. I didnt expect a story happening in a bus to be that interesting . I guess you can meet inspiration everywhere. :) You know, Polish buses arent much different. Expect that we dont have bingo-playing elders, they usually travel to their outside-town gardens xD. I really enjoyed the scene where Mello said "No, I just like pissing people off" or sth similar. xD That was hilarious xD. But my fav sentence is... (drums...):
" Matt interrupted. "Mello, are you retarded?"
"...what?"
"I let you feel up my butt for fifteen whole minutes, Mello. You really think a straight guy'd do that?" Yep, that was a MASTER'S RETORT! Hooray for Matt! xD
as i said, a great idea, funny plot and a bit fluff in the end. Just perfect :)

Teehee, I love how Matt keeps asking Mello whether he's retarded or not and then Mello doesn't end up answering the question!

Hahaha, hardcore Thursday? Epic. XD Bingo-playing old people FTW! Anyways, this was cute. XD I like it. :P But I like all of your fics, so that's not really an accurate measure of anything. :P

So, anyways, Matt's bus experience sounds a bit like my school bus experience! What with the loud music leaking through headphones and pushing and shoving and having to stand... blurgh. :P Less old people on mine, though. XD

Ooh, and it was a one shot! I love one shots, because you don't have to wait weeks for it to come to an end. *Is impatient* :P And they got together, yayyyy! And, awww, insecure Mello. :P Cutest thing ever! :P

Fav lines: "No, no I'm not," Mello informed me cheerily," Sounds like he gets asked that a lot, haha. (:

"You probably think I'm a freaky stalker now, right?" Awwww, but I doubt it, Mello. XD

Anyways, thanks for writing! :P And, yeap, I'll see you next time in Celestial! (:

Rainbow Fruit Loop (don't know why I still do this, you know who I am...)

That was cute. Where did your inspiration come from? (: