Oh my gosh! Wow! I Absolutely loved this story! :)

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and remember reading it before. It was so memorable, that I had to scan through countless stories on this site to find it again. I didn't get a chance to review this before but I must say that it was absolutely incredible. Great characterization, I heard both Lee and Amanda throughout your entire story and it flowed so well. It had everything I look for in a story, which included danger, mystery and of course romance between our main characters. Great job. I wish you would write some more! I know it's been a long time but I'd love to see more work from you!

You two adorable fools, wasting precious time denying what your heart and soul already know: you were made for each other! Sweet insightful story!

Wow! Excellence is your middle name!

Perfect! You left us wanting more, but this works as a stand alone.

Two words, Love It.

I love this. .you should still be writing. ..this story is very believable and the characters stayed true to themselves. Thanks for writing it and sharing.

That's really sad and very cowardly of them. But then the struggle to keep their feelings for each other hidden continues. Absolutely brilliant storytelling. Keep up the good work.

Like the story but need more! Please write more chapters!

wow this story is so goodi had to read it 3 times well done and post more of these :)

Lovely, but oh so bittersweet. Nicely done.

"Lee – I know this may sound like a silly question to you, but why aren't we dead yet?"

loved this line!

very visual tale, good job!

Just discovered this and had to leave a review. Very nicely done - well written. You have Amanda's voice down to a T! I can so see this happening. Any plans to continue? You have quite a few fans out here who would love more.

Love this story! Thanks for sharing. Linda

Good story :-)