| Reviews for Of Pain, Suffering, and Dedication |
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Lillianne Matake chapter 1 . 2/6/2014 Owh god... I can't stop crying.. Owh god.. I just.. :') |
KidTantei chapter 1 . 6/1/2013 This angst is beautiful can I just ahhhh. Every word in this fic is beautifully placed together, and your writing is beautiful too, and it makes me incoherent darn it. I see Kaname and Nobara as such gentle people, and for them to have so much emotion in this story is just so... emotional. ;u; Reading this is like selling my soul to the devil except I'm actually selling it to the Queen of Angst. orz But it was a beautiful story, so it's all worth it. Thank you for this. :D |
Winter's Melancholy chapter 1 . 5/6/2013 You know, I can understand Kanabara now. You say that my writing makes you want to ship NxM again. Now, I'm going to thank you for introducing me to this pairing. I thought it was absurd, but your ability made it a piece of utter genius. Flawless prose as always. As expected. Nothing more to say. This is a gem, indeed. -Q.E. |
Noly Hotoke chapter 1 . 5/3/2013 Definitely a really sad story. I was actually rooting for KanameXNobara team up for so long. They seem to be one of those perfect, kind-hearted couples. I love them both. The most painful part of life is being forgotten by someone you really love. Been there. And it was difficult. I actually cried while reading this. It somehow awakened my senses. I pity the two of them. Innocent love. -N.H- |
nullurl chapter 1 . 4/27/2013 Wow. Another lovely masterpiece from the queen of angst. You never made me ship Kanabara harder. :) First off, I love how you traced their history back when they were kids both in the hospital. It really does seem canon, because with Kaname being sick, and Nobara having her parents as doctors and stuff. The fact that both of their parents didn't want to be associated with either of them is also believable. Great job! "Nobara had lived with this thought. Kaname lived not remembering anything at all." Like, wow. This line really had me. I think this was the first sentence to ignite the flare of pain in my heart. Also, the fact that Nobara endures the pain of her friend not knowing her is painful in itself, yet she still perseveres and visits him everyday to hopefully create a spark that would make Kaname start remembering. Utterly brilliant fic. You have done it again, Annabelle Rae. Cheers. (P.S. THE LAST LINE KILLED MY KOKORO.) |
Autumn Win-Dow chapter 1 . 4/26/2013 OH MY GOD. Thanks for dedicating this to me! It's really an honor, considering how amazing this fic is. You're really breaking my heart, Athena. This ship just started sailing, and now I'm already having feels of heartbreak and sadness and love for this wonderful pairing. YOU'RE OVERDOING IT. ;A; The concept of this fic was heartbreaking in itself, and the more I read, the more I felt like I was going to cry. Really. And when he called out her name? When he was pretending? Before I read that, I thought this fic couldn't get any more heartbreaking (I've said that word so many times but expect more because I'm incoherent with feels right now omgh), but hell, I was wrong. So wrong. You really captured the emotions of both of these characters. And the best part of it is that you emphasised their vulnerability. They're both very vulnerable characters, and you really captured that through their actions, reactions, and feelings. AND BY DOING THAT, I FEEL VULNERABLE JUST READING. Your writing is amazing, as usual. Very descriptive, very sensual, very HEARTBREAKING OMFG I love you so much Athena for writing this. I haven't had a good cry in a while. And that ending line just- it killed me, Athena. It killed me. ;A; This is so heartwrenchingly beautiful. |