| Reviews for Iced Candy Adventure |
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   MLeggyLeaf chapter 1 . 10/25/2016 lol puking? nice |
| Isella of the wolf tribe chapter 5 . 9/7/2016 Ahh~ Why you no update Update sooon~~~ |
| HaPPy2901 chapter 6 . 9/3/2016 ohhh... candice got brother-zoned awwww... |
| HaPPy2901 chapter 3 . 9/3/2016 there's already a slight problem here... how the hell did kurapika read her name! didn't they have a different languange! heck kurapika shouldn't be able to read them since it is in english! oh well let just scrap it and just enjoy the moment. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/2/2016 Honestly, I thought I would hate this, but it's better than I expected. When Candice kept correcting "Kurapika" or some part of the name to "the Kurapika cosplayer" whenever she thought it, I didn't find it particularly funny at first, but the fourth time, for some reason, made me laugh so loud that I think the neighbors are probably concerned. You've earned my trust. |
| chibianimefan26 chapter 7 . 10/30/2015 I SCREAMED WHEN I SAW THAT THIS UPDATED BECAUSE SCREAMSSSSSSSS THIS STORY IS AMAZING I LOVE THIS STORY i like reading these types of stories - when the main is invisible xD its fun to read about them~ |
| Avextu chapter 7 . 7/7/2015 Ok I'm procrastinating from studying and this popped up in my email so I decided to give it a try, despite knowing next to nothing about HunterxHunter. And being the rebel I am, I started reading from the latest chapter. Here's some criticism: It seems to me that you're telling rather than showing, at least in the first half of this chapter where you're describing Candice's sickness and her recent activity. Maybe you explored this in previous chapters, but that's my first impression. Also it seems too quick paced, but that might also just be me. As for the second half, with the boy named Rabbit - well this was considerably more interesting. I'm interested in the boy's motivations and what makes him think that aliens exist. I like his interactions with Rei and the other villagers. However, my only complaint is that his dialogue seems just a tad bit mature for his age. I'm given the impression that he'd be around 6-10 years old maybe. His voice seems a little bit too forced, but maybe I don't understand the context which this is set in. Anyways, good luck with whatever you'll be doing until November. ;) |
| kittyfinatic515 chapter 7 . 6/22/2015 Great story so far, can't wait to see what Candice's journey is like, and when she reunites with Kurapika! Not quite sure what the second part of this chapter is about, interested to see how it ties in to the continuation of the story though :) |
| BizzyLizy chapter 7 . 6/22/2015 Seems interesting so far. Can't wait till the next chapter :) |
| Isella of the wolf tribe chapter 7 . 6/22/2015 Update soon! I can't wait to read more! It's so good and I want Candice to find Kurapika soon! |
| sxcond chapter 6 . 3/4/2015 Great story! Update soon please! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/21/2015 ... I love it!... |
| Nameless Angel 00 chapter 6 . 1/6/2015 cant wait for an update ;) |
| x10TIMEx chapter 6 . 11/4/2014 Oh my god, please continue with this story! I love it! I'm growing attached to Candice and I want to know what will happen next! The suspense is killing me! XD |
| prince eternal chapter 6 . 11/1/2014 Oh wow, this is really interesting, but THE UPDATE DATE IS NOT RECENT! The general populace needs an update! How will Candice meet up with Kurapika again? Will anyone else be able to see her? Will she have secret superpowers she is currently ignorant of? Can't wait for more! —Alice |
