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Katy69091 chapter 10 . 3/21
This was insanely good I cried multiple times for sadness and joy and I did not expect this to be so good It was amazing I Beg you to update this and let it finish good with a happy ending please and that a year or 2 has passed before Natsu claims Lucy because you can't instantly allow that to happen yet but thank you and please update this
Jules chapter 10 . 10/13/2019
So sad am I where is the rest of it I would be honoured if you would finish this story as I have really enjoyed it so far
Fluffy-Experiment chapter 10 . 9/4/2019
Please continue!
Guest chapter 4 . 9/1/2019
Ppp0ppppppppppp
sakshishetty3003 chapter 10 . 6/18/2019
I am glad that you didn't discontinue this story. I hope you post the next chapter soon enough.
ana chapter 10 . 2/24/2019
Still waiting for more.
Love it.
StiCyLover chapter 10 . 12/12/2018
OMG this story is amazing! Really well written can't wait to see the next chapter!
dani-yell10 chapter 10 . 10/21/2018
What has taken 5 years to write I have binged in a day and a half while watching my 2 year old.
Please don't stop!

You have come so far!

You can finish this in two, maybe three chapters!

1) Natsu goes nuts and violently slaughters the clan, which can be two parts if you really wanted to. I don't care, I just need justice!
2) Lucy accepts that he loves her no matter what, they make sweet love and then end with the cliffhanger of her being knocked up!

BAM!

Start writing the sequel
Your welcome
ABT4Life chapter 10 . 10/13/2018
Thank you so much for writing the story! I can’t wait for more.
Forbidden-Hanyou chapter 10 . 9/23/2018
This is a very good story so far!
CathJorda chapter 10 . 9/22/2018
oh waow I got stuck into this story until 2.30am. And im not a night owl. good writing. I've been thoroughly traumatised. I just want Natzu to kill those horrible disgusting slayers and for Lucy to get herself back and fight for herself.
Poopdeck chapter 10 . 9/21/2018
I love the angst! Your story made me cry so much, and I love the plot that can only build up from here! I really was scared that the marks the dragon slayers gave Lucy was fatal and permanent, but knowing that it can be removed just erased my doubts :-) Please continue, your story is awesome. By the way, I’m in college as well, I totally get the time you would have to take in order to get the work done! Especially if you have more than two classes per school year.
mushi9 chapter 10 . 9/20/2018
Amazing chapter! Very emotuonal!
takeagamble27 chapter 10 . 9/20/2018
eyy! Welcome back! Congrats with Uni girl! This story is still baller and I can't wait to see where you take it! :)
Revanchist21 chapter 10 . 9/20/2018
This story is getting good! Keep up the good work man! Hope to see more chapters in the near future soon!
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