hey how about the next chapter

That was too good , with Jade and Roy overhearing them . Yea , Jade will never let Artemis hear the end of it . And will probably think of some creative ways to embarrass her and Wally in front of the whole family .

Loved it!

Amazing you did a awsome job and how much they love each other its sooo perfect love it and he's planning on proposing to her sooo sweet and jade and roy heard them hilarious updayee soon :-)

To put it simply, I just loved this. I love the way you truly captured the love between the two. You took your time with it, meaning it didn't seem rushed and you could easily tell the genuine compassion the couple felt for one another. I honestly wasn't expecting Wally to even consider proposing right now, but I'm super happy just for the indication that he has yet to very soon. It builds the story to a whole other level and leaves room for more material to work with for future chapters. Seriously looking forward to the next chapter!

P.S. Also, really enjoyed Roy and Jade's little "input" after entering the cabin. Too funny!

-Anonymous :)

That was really great. , well worth the wait. I'm glad you decided to have Wally wait and talk to Ollie before he proposes . That kind of thing a father will remember , that Wally showed him the respect to ask for Artemis' hand . Please update soon can't wait for next chapter .

That was well worth the wait . Very well written . Glad you decided to have Wally wait and ask Ollie for Artemis hand before proposing . That is the kind of thing a father remembers long after his daughter is married . Don't know how old you are , but you are a great writer . Can't wait for next chapter . Please update soon thanks bye .

Very romantic. It had Roy and Jade. So funny

I'm so happy that there's more to this :)

That was hot.

Omg they did it and yay update can't wait for more

Love it :-) funny seeing her sister in the chapter