Great conclusion. I enjoyed that story. Well done!

I guess it's appropriate that we no not of the Stranger's identity but still, it would have been interesting if it were someone *we* knew but Sandor didn't.

I was wondering why Tyrion was the Smith. Whilst it is not the typical smith, I see your reasoning. I think this chapter came out alright.

I disagree. I think it was quite a strong chapter. It showed weakness on Sandor's part and finally receiving the loving that he so obviously needed back then.

I never made the connection between A Christmas Carol and your story, however. There are obviously similarities in that he is visited from the Faith of the Seven but that is where the similarities end, as far as I'm concerned.

Anyway, looking forward to continuing on... :-)

I LOVED this fic so much! It's so deep and meaningful... You should consider write a sequel, showing how Sandor will take the learning and blesses granted by the gods to save the little bird. Congratulations, you did a great job!

Wonderful... I love your emphasis on the power of faith.

Amazing story! I loved every chapter and the use of mythology was perfect. The idea of this fic is great, really. It was daring to imagine such a story because some of these gods are less inspiring than others, but some people told you that already, I guess! Great job!

Loved it
Great ending

HELLo again!

Well, surprise, I was reviewing and then, I have an other chapter!

I'm a little bit tired, so it will be difficult to not forget/mistake something or just say something completly false (especially qith my problems to explaim myself in your langage), but I would try.

It's a good end for your plot. At the begin, we already knew that it wasn't about a sansan Relationship. I mean, yes, it was, but it was more about how Sandor would change his mind to move his ass out off the Quiet Isle to save his prety litle bird, just like "a knight saving his beatiful princess" like in he songs, but it wouldn't be about HOW he saves the girl. It was more about self-thinking and religion, not about action or romantic feelings.
You kept this idea during all your fiction: good point.

You gave us a little view of what/how/who/when/why all of this in the Stranger's chapter. To be honest, I wish I couls know more about it, but it is not for this story. Maybe you want to let us imagine it by ourselves (but if you want to write something about that in a new story... Well, I think I would gladly read it).
So, as usually, I want more because I like your idea, and how you wrhite, but see it more like a compliment than a reproach.

You wrote Sandor well. He wasn't an un-thinking rude asshole as he wasn't turning into a fair maid falling in love (or like a glittering fu... knight distributing flowers/kisses and falling deeply into silliness to come to a shy, happy, fool men in love). He was just like he must.

I should say many, many more, but I just want to go to sleep so... Good night/continuation, I hope I'll be more talkative I that I would cath my first houghts back to explain it better later.

Mad J-J.

P.S. : Keep writing!

Oh I loved the dream: Sandor as a happy mutt chasing a singing bird is too sweet and very optimistic. I really do hope he will be the one to take Sansa from Littlefinger [or Petry...fucking...Baelish]: LF would hate that and hopefully die trying to stop it.
This was great. Thanks.

HELLo!

I suppose it was difficult for you to chose how to do with this one. It complicated for so many reason; it's the more mysterious god of the seven, it's the last one, it's kind of Sandor's favourite god, ...

I'm not sure I'm completly happy with this one. Maybe because I expected a real person, or maybe because I'm just a *M%£3&é capricious girl.

Good points are that he is really mysterious (as the Futur in "A Christmas Carol"), he is "more" that the others (He shows the futur, wow! Such a good idea to explain us what will happen then, without showing us everything in other chapters, which would not fit with the first idea!), and it's a ending for all we had before.

I insist about the futur's vision: it's a f****ng good idea. It gives mors importance about Sandor's role in Westeros, but without showing too much: just excellent.

What else can I say? Can't wait for the last chapter, love your writing and hope you'll be fine!

Mad J-J.

Loved it

Gee Willakers, I wonder what the inspiration behind THIS chapter was...

This was very Christmas Carol in having the visions of one very bleak outcome but also original in having the possibility of a better outcome, a happy one. I like that you kept the Stranger a stranger though his size makes me wonder if it is not himself underneath, determining his own future.
Imagery of the bleak future was quite strong though, very well written: it is quite an accomplishment to get so much across with a spare use of words.

That is interesting. Though Tyrion was pretty awful to the poor of Kings Landing.