Awesome! I love this

This was an intense short fic. The ending was perfect! I kind of wanna see what Natsu has planned for Gray for his "punishment"...

Great fanfic!

Fuck this gay shit!

that whole story was dark and twisted shit but the ending was amazing

Good job I guess
maybe next time have natsu be consenting and nalu ne faked

Omg I love all your gratsu stories !

pwease make a nowther chawpter

I loved it! Please add another chapter

Cauterizing a wound doesn't bring a person back from the dead... especially not after two minutes.
Plot vise the story was an okay read for me. To be honst I expected something darker and emotionally more painful when I read the description. Personally I would have wished for a greater focus on emotions, in my opinion such a thing is important for a suicide/rape story. Over all it somewhat lacked depth for the theme.
But it is a good attempt, keep going and improve. And in terms of this theme, try to read a few books on the issue. After all a writer can only write what he knows.

My god it's the angsty-est and saddest story I have ever read but somehow is also funny and frustrating. I am crying like a pig-which, does pigs even cry?-and I'm glad I have the room to myself. I just had to give a review here. THE PLOT is awesome and nearly sadder than my best friend's, THE STORY ITSELF is well written and I really love your stories, Rhov, although I just recently started reading from and THE ENDING is pretty good. It would be interesting (it's probably only interesting to me) if there's a fight scene between Natsu and Gray, like more intense than that. I like fight scenes, but it works this way too. If you have time, you could make several alternate endings, like where Gray died or Natsu died or Gray stuck to his original plan of leaving. The suicide part was surprising to me, and after the self-loathing part, I really forgot Gray had Ice-Make magic because I was so immersed in the story that I could only think about what's in front of me. I almost thought he's going to actually find a rope somewhere first and hung himself sometime later which was stupid since he can-as the story goes-make a damn knife on his own.

Well, that's pretty long. Man, I never type reviews this long. Anyways, good luck on writing and updating Rhov! Looking forward to more in the future, especially FMBM. Love that masterpiece!

With the Darkest Sincere.
~

fuck
I'm dying
I think I'm gonna explode
Why do I find this funny?

Oh my god! I looooooved the part at the end with Juvia! It was awesome! I'm soo so glad that Gray and Natsu ended up together! I just love this fanfics sooooooo much!1

Pleasepleaseplease add a bonus chapter.

Please do a bonus chapter!

Awww i luvre this cute ending!
Ps: PLZ write out an epilougue where natsu topped gray? Plzzzzz~?