Aww, that ties it up nicely.

It feels like she said some of that stuff earlier, but it was a well-written scene.

They can't just ignore it, that would be ridiculous! She turned into a little kid!

I like that her characterisation is consistent

That was a nicely fluffy chapter.

It's quite unusual for these fics that you've shown England getting tired, but I like it.

Good to see that he's stopped the jealousy before it became an issue.

Well, I suppose it's historically accurate, and fits with the canon enough, though a strange choice to put in a family bonding fic.

Is North getting jealous? Of someone so small?

It's interesting seeing the interactions between the different characters.

I like how you didn't immediately make everything perfect.

She seems sweet, and a well-fleshed out OC

Your story is amazing! I really enjoyed it...

I always enjoyed stories in which there are role reversals (such as the younger becoming the older one) and you did not fail to disappoint me. It was nice seeing a female Scotland for a change. I just loved the little moments between her and big-brother England, especially when she opened up about things. It seems to me that children don't have a hard time opening up about things than adults do. The epilogue at the end was sweet and I felt like it was the perfect ending for this fic, tying it back to the theme of siblings and children.

However I'm not sure that "M" is the approiatate rating for the fic. I feel like "T" is a better rating because you only really hinted at what Rome did to France, Portugal and her, you never explicitly said what happened.

Grammar wise and spelling-wise it was fine for English however in French I noticed France referred to Scotland as "Mon Cher" which is the masculine form of "My dear" the approiatate form for feminine is "Ma Cherie" which is an easy mistake and admittedly Im not fluent in French, I just happen to know that little tidbit :)

Other than that, it was great fic and I enjoyed reading it

well that just shattered my heart

you're an amazing writer, you know that? especially your england fics, the british isles family fics.

and, god, england's line about how all he wanted was to know he was good at something just broke my heart. really.

thanks for the brilliant story, and if you're not too busy sometime maybe you could be interested in a femEngland family fic..? ;) haha or just ignore me