I want to know more...please update because this is soooo go! I love the reverse roles and everything! EEP!

Aww poor Serena plz update soon.

Why dont you add another chapter please! This is good

Share the anime that is cool!

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Please update! I love this story! I have reread this story like 20 times! I love it that much!

Really good story so far.

Just a suggestion to help Darien seem more masculine, maybe instead of Darien biting his lip, he clenches his fist.
And instead of batting his lashes for cookies, maybe puppy dog eyes.
Lastly the sticking out of tongue, maybe swap to him giving the (finger) bird :)
Sarah

Whenz are you going to update?! The suspense is killing me!

This is a very good story, I really like the roles being flipped it makes things so much more entertaining! I hope Darien and Serena will get over the hurdles that are going on between them. Please update soon!

PS- I have written a story featuring Darien and Serena. It is titled 'Moonrise'. May you please check it out and provide constructive criticism or advice through a review? I would greatly appreciate it since it is my first Sailor Moon story. Thank you for taking the time to read this note!

I wasn't really expecting Darien to break up with Serena. I wonder if Serena in this story will be forgiving when she finds out the truth? UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

this is fantastic! this chapter still has a couple english errors like WAIT TO GO ANDY! i know you meant way. we are all only human. also there's a point that says Molly's mother instead of Andrew's.

other than that, I like that Darien has his family but I wouldn't use Serena's family. I would change their names and appearance a little. looking forward to how the scouts are going to play into this :)

I also like Luna working with Darien, curious how Serena became Sailor Moon in your story

Oooh great twist to the R break up. What will Serena do know. Great chapter. Update soon.

Wwwwwhhhhhaaaatttttt?! I honesty don't know why I'm surprised, I mean, it happens in the anime, but still! Please update soon! I REALLY want to see how you play this off!

Nice chapter, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

Very, very good! I laughed at the SMA ref when he found Luna, "Screw this! I don't want rabies!" XD I think it would have made more sense for Sammy to be a girl here, though. In any case, it was very good! I'll keep reading for sure!

Nice