Well, you are right about those two. Great job!

OMG... So Sexy O/O

Holy crap!

Two words to describe this fic: Sexy and Awesome. Keep up the good work!

Sexy and gorgeous :3

The last bit in parenthesis flows very nicely, and yeah - short but sweet. Still - and I do read /and/ write non-con - I don't like this. It's just... rape. In this case, I can't see it as anything but pure, rapey non-con, and it honestly doesn't work that way.

(Maybe because there's too little build-up to really justify the whole "[realizing] that he is right" thing. Other fic like this, I think, doesn't try to pretend that the rape isn't traumatic. That, or sufficient build-up or background makes it more logically sound to draw that conclusion...? Here, the focus is mainly on Izaya; Namie's thoughts and feelings almost serve as a last-minute guilt reliever.)

Sorry - always awkward leaving semi-negative comments. I like your writing, but not the way the ideas were conveyed. 3/5? *feels awkward*

at first i didn't know what was going to happen and i kept making confused faces and then it clicked. ._.

but it was short and sweet and i liked it! i loved the style of this; i think you should do more like it.

HAHAHAHA!XD