| Reviews for Wrong place, wrong time |
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Kaijucifer chapter 17 . 3/9 Yeah this was rushed terribly. None of it resolved at all. Felt like you didnt know how to finish each plotline, and the way James' story ends is kinda a copout, he's just resigned to suffer with no closure. For the Trios, there's no real explanation of what happened over the two years. For Hall and Clara, the dude in the previous chapter should be here mate. Overall you dropped the ball with this..."ending". So I'll just use my headcanon and say everyone is reunited after a long and arduous Journey, the military and biotech corporation pulls a Jurassic Park/Umbrella Corporation and bites it, James is back with Hall and his Daughter, the little punk, North, who sold him out is gutted and dies, and the others take out the Bad Blood clan and escape back to Earth using a Yautja scout ship with all 6 of them living in harmony. There, much better and more believable and fitting end to this story. |
Kaijucifer chapter 16 . 3/9 Well, how is this gonna end? |
Kaijucifer chapter 15 . 3/9 Well, looks like a certain private is going to be living the rest of his short ass life in a lot of pain. |
Kaijucifer chapter 14 . 3/8 Well now...I hadn't expected it happen that soon, but great! |
Kaijucifer chapter 13 . 3/8 God I love your perfectly inserted references. |
Kaijucifer chapter 12 . 3/8 Hell's yeah, maybe they can all stay together as pairs of 3! |
Kaijucifer chapter 10 . 3/8 LOL schooling these Yautja. |
Kaijucifer chapter 9 . 3/8 Random Predator appearance! |
Kaijucifer chapter 8 . 3/8 Well now...That's interesting. |
Kaijucifer chapter 7 . 3/8 Hmm. I'm with Stein. General seems like a major Tool. |
Kaijucifer chapter 6 . 3/8 If they knew what was best for them, they'd stay tf out. These mfers just went full on Albert Wesker with the enhanced abilities after exposure. |
Kaijucifer chapter 5 . 3/8 Well...that was unnecessarily dark and didnt have any payoff. Bad idea to put in. Felt kinda edgy too. Rape for the sake of rape, not exactly scary. |
Kaijucifer chapter 4 . 3/8 Well, now. What could they find? And I love the difference between the two sisters lol. |
Kaijucifer chapter 3 . 3/8 Dudes having the time of their lives lmao! |
Kaijucifer chapter 2 . 3/8 Leave em' alone, Queenie! They're high as a kite! Hahaha. Oh they'll have to explain why it's so funny. |