Please add Oswald the lucky rabbit or an epic Mickey world, it'd be awesome to see Oswald.

Hmm Which world that sora donald and goofy are to land this time? And what new keyblade's that sora going to obtained with new transformation skill's he going to have now?

I would like to see sora donald and goofy going to arendelle who knows maybe they will bummed into anna hmm what kind of keyblade that sora will get this time during his visit in arendelle?

Look's like mickey star shard it's still on the frizz again. Hmm where are they going land this time? man i would love to see mickey wielding different keyblades with riku and kairi maybe they get new keyblades too on their quest.

Hmm wonder what keyblade that sora got from his travel in Rapunzel world i wonder and what's does it's look like anyway?

I hope the next chapter will be great hmm it's sora riku kairi and mickey will get new keyblade's as they travel all over the world and when's sora keyblade transform into something new?

I wonder what world that riku kairi and mickey are going to first and which world that sora donald and goofy are going to land this time?

Glad to see you posted another chapter for KH III.
I am also a fan of the movie Tangled, so I enjoyed reading about this new World.
I particularly like how Sora was boosted up to the tower. That was fun and admirable for the heroic trio!
But I must ask as this could not easily be overlooked... Where is Flynn Rider, aka Eugene Phitzherbert... however it's spelled? Do you dislike the character or something? He's my favorite! lol
I liked how Cloud made a surprising return.
King Mickey, Riku and Kairi...IN THE KEYBLADE GRAVEYARD?! Yikes! That has to be a bad thing on so many levels! lol
Good work.
Hope you post the next chapter soon!

I love Tangled! I'm glad you included it. Plus, I like how Van was speaking to Ven through Sora's heart. However, I'm more interested in what's going on with Riku's trio. Update soon!

Yes, I'm one of those wondering how you cannot like Tim Burton's Alice in Wonderland (because it's fudging amazing - so much better than the original!). xD Not that it matters. It's just a nice change to see that world instead of the old one. (I thought it sucked in the game, too! Almost as bad as Monstro LOL.) Anyways, I love the Hatter and for him to take such a big part in this was awesome.

Vincent?! Awesome! I love him! It was nice to see him in this - despite my dislike of the Hercules world (they seriously could have done sooo much more with it) in the game. Anyways, good job on this chapter! I hope we do get to see what's going on with Kairi-Mickey-Riku, though. Like will she be attacked by the organization? Will the heartless target her?

I'm wondering how Vanitas exists in this . . . considering how Ven shattered his heart and kind of got rid of him (unless I missed something). Anyways, I noticed that you tend to keep conversations very brief. I think it would be interesting so include a little more emotion when they speak and to have the conversations be a little more fleshed out. I felt with Hayner and the others it was just a 'Hey.' 'Hey.' 'Goodbye.' type of convo and was kind of awkward and unnecessary. Of course, the game can be like that, too (in fact, I feel they did a poor job with the script in almost all the games - they were awkward and corny a lot and sometimes felt embarrassed even hearing/reading it - though, there are scenes I do like - Namine and Roxas' conversations for instance).

Honestly, the whole 'bringing everyone back' concept always bugged me. It feels so unrealistic that the creators want to do that (despite my love for Roxas and Namine's characters). I do understand saving Aqua and Ven, but I feel Terra is too far gone to be saved - but of course they have to save EVERYONE. UGH. Makes it less touching and sad when they go in the games (to me).

Anyways I can't wait to see what happens.

More RiKai friendship bonding! I love that! She gets to become a part of team Riku-Mickey. That's certainly different! But it makes sense - you know with KH's tendency to focus on trios and all. xD

It was nice seeing Kairi and Riku working together - their lack of interaction in the series was always a peeve, considering how stressed their relationship was in the first game (they're supposed to be three best friends, yet it feels like Sora is best friends with both, while Riku and Kairi are just acquaintances). Anyways, I wonder if you will have Sora struggle with the darkness within himself...