I think you could do a follow up ;-) ... I can't see Bri sitting behind a desk..twiddling pencils all day long... And someone needs to pay for all the damage. We need a victory ;)

KELLY PREGNANT WOULD BE SO ADORABLE!

abc, why don't you look at the story above this?

Kelly being pregnant would be AMAZING!

dont want to be rude but i didn't understand a lot of this? things were really random and didnt make sense to me also english isnt my first language. did i miss somewhere why all of them are getting beat up all the time? i asm noone to be listening to how to write because i cant do it but next time you could do something different? sabrina also not my favorite i am hoping to find less sabrina stories on the site but everybody likes her. good ending i guess good job

I love this, but I definitely think you should write more! Maybe explain more of how they got out of Death Valley and how Sabrina is doing now? Either way, thanks for this

I've been with this story for years an enjoyed the wait and anticipation between each update! I've always wanted someone to write a story about the original angels, Kelly, Sabrina, and Jill. Kelly is dating a police man and ends up pregnant. Hopefully you'll be the writer to listen and proceed with the idea. Best wishes!

Thanks for coming back and ending the story like I feel it should be. I was already wondering what happened when they escaped and ran into the Las Vegas Cops (am I keeping my story straight?) I think this is a good place to end it (the way it is written seems to be a good ending now and you could now start a new story with the girls and the re-appearance of the Aryan and her group of zombies - just ideas to throw out at you). Thanks for finishing up this story; been always looking for the end of it and am now happy that you came back.

Well I for one am sure glad you made it back to try finish off this very nailbiting story Lk. With all you have on your plate...am ever amazed at your energies.
This was one hell ride for the angels. One nightmare they all would like to forget. Yet... As angels rise...nightmares resurface. Who knows? What next... For the outcome from Death Valley? I feel like...there is yet something more lurking just... around the corner?
Very well done on returning to this Lk...and wanting to wrap up your fic. X. Good good work...and keep strong X

Hey, I really miss this story and am always checking for updates! Please come back! :)

Just had to re-read chapter 39 (needed to refresh my mind of what went on). Please update soon. Looking forward to your updates! Thanks.

I'm so glad you've added more chapters! They were really exciting and dramatic. What's gonna happen in Las Vegas? Too many possibilities! Thanks so much for this awesome story! Keep it up!

Keep on going. This story needs a "real" end - not just ending it when the chapter ends.
I see Sabrina's guilty feeling for Hope as previously she couldn't give away Kelly's name so Alice was killed. Sabrina doesn't want to leave Hope behind, even though Hope reopened her wounded shoulder and would be a hindrance, always needing to stop.
I'd like to see what happens next now that the first vehicle they passed by was a patrol car (were they really patrol officers or were they taken over by "Zombies"?)

Wow, it's been so long, had to go backwards a couple chapters to make sure where I was. Interesting end to this chapter. First we find out that its crappy stuff Kris got (thankfully), then the phone lines were cut, and there's not too much food. Lastly, to get out of there, Bri volunteers (?) to drive and gets lost. That's when things get interesting - arguing, Bri getting pissed off and then...machinegun fire. Keep us guessing.

I have been slacking on reading my stories. Just caught up with you. I love your story it is different and very well written. The whole point of fanfiction is to reach out and read something different. And you really preview that. Looking forests to more of your great story.