I always enjoy how you write the Weasleys. You show their love and concern for each other very well! I like the range of emotions that Molly displayed throughout the fanfic; it made for realistic reading, IMO. You go through most (or all) of those when a loved one is gravely injured. I'm especially fond of this line: "You'd better wake up soon, old man. There are a lot of people worried about you." It's just so precious :) Overall, good work!

You, dear writer, hve made an incredibly beautiful story here.
It was quite short but held a lot of emotion, which made it all the more a strong fic. I'm sitting here with tears in my eyes and a smile platsered on my face, those last few lines were beautiful and a perfect ending to this story.

Really, congratulations on writing this magnificent one-shot! ;)

Aw I loved this little story!

I've always thought of Molly and Arthur having a very strong and stable relationship - you really can't imagine one without the other. You portray that so well here and the way you portray their relationship is just perfect. I loved Molly's thoughts, they were so relatable to her character.

I liked how you related her thoughts to when they were younger and how she fills the silence even though he cannot hear it. It was very touching. I also loved how she spoke about lack of money and how they had each other and that's all that mattered. The Weasley's to me always came across as one of the best families in the series because, even though the're not perfect or rich or anything, they all love each other so much and they stick close to each other. Anyway, I think you emphasised that really well here.

The ending sentence was perfect and definitely relatable.
Brilliant story, love it :D

I'm feeling this one right now, with my mom in the hospital and all. I needed to read it. Thank you.

Nice work, very insightful. I love how they fit together so well. Keep writing

This is the sweetest thing I have ever read. This was written perfectly and it's just tear-jerkingly beautiful and I just can't handle it. :'-)

The idea of this was amazing - while I wish it was longer, because it was so good, you developed the idea of him being another part of her so well. It was a great theme, and gave the story a deeper layer.

And the part when Molly started talking to Arthur made me cry. THAT WAS NOT OKAY YOU GAVE ME TOO MANY FEELS. I loved it!

Plus, you wrote so many beautiful lines! Like:

[They were a package deal, Molly-and-Arthur-Weasley, they had been since they were sixteen and, Molly knew, they always would be.]

[She turned and slowly walked away, feeling with every step like she was leaving a part of her behind, because she was.]

And this whole last paragraph because this is just perfect in too many ways:

[Don't we all leave a part of ourselves with the people we care about? They become a part of us, and we become a part of them, and there's something beautiful about the fact that some things – things like love and hope and family – endure no matter what.]

I can't believe you thought you couldn't write well enough for my birthday. This is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read and I will cherish this forever. Thank you!

I really enjoyed reading this! Great job! :)

3 so sweet, love this pairing :)