This is super cute! And a bit bittersweat. I like it. :)

OMG so cute! Loved the emotion!

Some really lovely imagery here, especially the "pounce" sentence. (I have a weakness for a well-placed semi-colon!) Excellent job at describing action in particular. I really liked the last line, too. "The smell of food" struck me as a little vague... what kind of food? [/is a pedant]

Really enjoyed this one x

Best friend reporting for duty! Haha

Whoaaaaa this is simply amazing! I think you just fulfilled the fantasy of every Immortal Rain reader out there. Awesome reunion! The way you wrote it, I felt like the scene was MEANT to happen. Perhaps even the mangaka intended for the readers to picture this in their mind.

Cute change of name, by the way. Or is it a nickname for "Yuca"? Does "Yuu" mean anything in particular? XD Love the cover picture too! I can just IMAGINE Yuu-chan running home to his beloved parents. Awwwwww 3 Machika and Rain as parents is just so sweet Though I can't imagine their reaction when their child grew to look like Yuca XD I'm glad Yuca finally managed to experience a proper childhood. "A child who had only known love and never suffering." _

The way you described Yuca sitting on Rain's shoulders...Did Tohou Shinigami inspire you? XD the scene that came to my mind was Machika on Zol's shoulders, and Zol all flustered cuz Machika called him "Papa?" HAHAHAHAHA

Also, I like the way you summed up Yuca's past situation and his fears. I have a question, though. What happened to the kitten? Haha the father saved a puppy, the son rescued a kitten. Such a cute coincidence! XD

Is it too much to ask for more...? Pretty pretty please with Yuca, Rain, Machika, a puppy and a kitten on top? w hahahahaha