Reviews for Dead End
Brisa Guilty chapter 15 . 5/4
I Love It
I Love so much
kaoruca chapter 15 . 4/30
So short! Can't wait to read more. Their first kiss and then it stops. Oh, I hope you post another one soon.
kaoruca chapter 14 . 4/22
Ooooh! I'm squealing as a crazy fangirl! I can't believe he said that! But as I have told you before I don't think it's time to beat around the bush. He thought he would never see her again, and now there's no time to lose.
She will feel reluctant and think she is going to let her down, but Ed is going to be so mad at those men and feel so guilty for not being there for her, for not protecting her. I hope they will heal together.
Thanks for the fast update!
kaoruca chapter 13 . 4/21
You've made my day. I've missed this story so much. Ed was too bold (taking into account how reluctant he had always been to talk about his feelings and to get straight to the point), but after all they've been through he has clearly changed. Who wouldn't? And I like it. There is no time to lose, not in this world. I wish this were longer, but alas! We have to wait to the next one.
Please, please, update a bit sooner. Let us read about them and the impending conversation still to come. About Al's recovery and feelings, too.
And thank you so much for the update and not giving up on this. I hope you're safe.
kaoruca chapter 12 . 9/16/2019
Oh my gosh. How much I have waited to read this one chapter! Thank you, thank you for continuing this amazing story. I was soooo happy when I saw it. And I've loved it.
At last! They're together. All of them. But I can't help but focus on Ed and Winry. Can't wait to read more about them, about their conversations about what had happened and their future, about their love and healing together, about their surviving from now on. Please keep on, don't stop writing. I'll be eagerly waiting for the next ones. Your writing is really good.
kayla.samantha.alvarez chapter 11 . 4/21/2019
I’ve been getting updates of this story until I finally had the time to read it and honestly it’s so amazing but so tragic, but also so heart warmingg. Omgggg when I read about Jean potentially having feelings for Winry.. I lost my shiittttt ! (Or maybe I just read it wrong ?) anyway just counting the days for the next update(: & for Ed, Al’s & Win’s reunion.
kaoruca chapter 11 . 4/21/2019
So glad to see the update. I hope they can meet very soon. Can't wait
kaoruca chapter 10 . 3/16/2019
Gosh, when are they going to meet? Can't wait
Guest chapter 8 . 2/22/2019
Can you please update I love College!
kaoruca chapter 9 . 2/23/2019
Oh my. Poor them! They are feeling so hopeless. They have to keep it together soon enough to find the others alive. The image of Granny being turned would plague their dreams with nightmares for years. Well and so many more horrible things. I hope they can meet soon and start to heal
GO DOMINIC chapter 8 . 1/26/2019
NO! Winry baby, I knew it was coming from the framing in the last chapter but god that poor girl thats terrifying and horrible and she's so strong for making it out of there
And YEAH DOMINIC THANK YOU oh man is any of his family alive, is Paninya gone too?

The brothers reaching Resembul is gonna kill me I bet considering the way this story has been going and how theres no communication lines and where are they gonna head next?
Guest chapter 7 . 1/25/2019
Nooo Havoc!
Oh my god idk what I was expecting but that wasnt it! Really hoping she can get out of there before anything happens

Oh man this hurts to read, if she makes it to central Ed and Al will be gone in Resembool
Cant wait for the next chapter!
kaoruca chapter 8 . 1/27/2019
Thank goodness she's finally safe. Another fast update? Thank you for this.
kaoruca chapter 7 . 1/26/2019
What a horrible chapter (for what's happened, that is). I hope Winry can escape soon from her captors and meet the Elrics soon. Oh, poor Jean. Will they find him turned first and think the worst has happened? They would be more than devastated.
asin-ka chapter 5 . 12/7/2018
Hope you'll continue this, I really want to know what happens next)
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