It's funny how I've read this story over a million times no joke lol I used to be a guest but since I had stories of my own, I decided to make an account and here I am again :)

This is the best thing i have ever read so far in my have a gift girl.

Read this long and wonderful one shot once again at midnight and I'm probably coming back to read it again, it's one of my favorites. I'd care to read a OneShot this long if it was this one and only this one. I can actually relate so much to it. Other than the Austin and his parents business thing or whatever. But I get it. You know the broken part, because I am broken and I've accepted it. I have no one to really help me through it because everyone is the problem but still, I love the rush of Ally comforting Austin and vice versa. It makes me feel complete and not alone. Stories like these are what make me feel better. So I want to say thank you for a wonderful story, although i might be very late on writing a review but I don't care. I hate reading anyway! (Other than FanFictions) I love this OneShot so much and even though you're done with writing Auslly, I'm okay with it because you have some real talent right there and you could use it with really anything and I'd be okay with that. Stay you and keep writing, you have a true gift. Thanks again, wonderful and amazing story

I cried (literally while reading this) (that's a REALLY REALLY GOOD THING because I usually don't cry at stories or movies, but this made me:) and, maybe you should rename the story "dangerous" because that word is mentioned so much. LOVE IT!

The Best story I EVER read! This story is so so so sooooo amazing! And you too! Love ya!3

O.K. I am probably wasting my time typing this review because you've been away ages and you'll most likely never read this but I just HAVE to show my appreciation for this magnificent piece;

"she's not at all surprised to see a familiar blonde boy standing on the grass below, not shivering despite the cooler night air." For some reason this particular line is one of my favorites because it's kinda symbolic in a crazy way; like, "she's not surprised" because he's always visiting her and if he's always visiting her it means he loves her truly and "not shivering despite the cooler night air" shows he's a strong guy. Sorry if any of that sounded stupid.

'"You could have broken the glass," She scolds, referring to the heavier stones he holds in his hand. "Bad boy."' Again, for some reason to me this line holds significance; he throws stones at her window! It's like Romeo and Juliet - but like Ally said, hopefully WITHOUT all the tragedy - and it's so cute, an adorable way to get attention. And even though she scolds him and calls him a "bad boy" she obviously secretly wants him there (and not really secretly hahaa)

"So all in all, he really is a bad boy. (Even if he's very very much a good boy.)" I LOVE THIS ONE! I swear I don't know why but when I read it my stomach did a somersault and butterflies flew around in it and I started giggling like a mad-woman! Like, he's a BAD BOY, but he's very much a GOOD BOY! Oh, it gets me every time.

"She panicks, thinking he'll run into the wall and gain himself a concussion or bruises or broken bones of some kind, and somehow, it'll be all her fault." This shows she cares.

One second she's calling him a "crazy boy"and the next she's saying she missed him :) one second he's a big-hard-bad-boy throwing stones at the window and the next he's just a big-ol-softie :)
She has a thing for his collarbone and his tattoos and his sexy black leather jacket and she thinks he's "smart and funny and sexy and kind".
'"Hi," He murmurs softly," and '"Hi," She murmurs back, muffled against his collarbone. (Which she'd never admit, she has a thing for.) "Missed you."' and '"Missed you too," He whispers into her hair," and "she does, after all, enjoy using him as a pillow from time to time. (Or all the time, but that stays quiet.)" and '"Wanted to come sit with you at lunch today," He mumbles again, grabbing her (tiny, so tiny) hand to squeeze it gently." are all PERFECTION. Not to forget; "Except, the thing is, he isn't bad. He doesn't steal, or commit hate crimes or join a gang." Perfecto.

I just love the way you portray the characters; Austin is described as a bad boy by the society around them with all the tattoos and the leather jackets and stuff but really, he's a good guy; Ally is the girl who has to deal with parents who disapprove of her love and that is supposed to be a cliché concept but strangely, the way you write it here makes it seem fresh and unused, in other words, completely new and fun and amazing to read. Again, I love how it's kinda like Romeo and Juliet at some angles - a family feud; Austin's parents caused the bankruptcy of Ally's family and that made the families hate each-other and it caused conflict, but then Austin and Ally don't care about that and they fall in love. This outline, it's been used before, but like I said, your writing style and portrayal of characters makes the idea seem so FRESH.

'"Settle down with me, cover me up, cuddle me in," He sings to her quietly, and she lets out a contented sigh." Awh; he sings to her! I died.

This story is BEAUTIFUL. I especially love the end, "She's not so insurgent on her own; and on his own, he's just disobediant. But together, they're the rebellion of a lifetime." It's the perfect closing-line and it just... ERGH. I don't know, it makes everything feel complete, you know? It's like... oh, gosh. I cannot explain it, please excuse me.

Overall, this was a wonderful piece. I'm really sorry for this extremely pointless, long-winded novel of a review, but I just needed to tell you how much I loved this. And trust me, I loved this a lot.

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Regards,
#my instincts say YES

Aww man. That was deep! LOVE YOUR STORIES. I can't wait to read Reckless Abandon! C;

This thing goes on forever

It was cool

Love you too

Oh my god. I couldn't stop reading. Please right more this was incredible.

OMG, I read this all the way through (taking a occasional snack or music break) and it was amazing! You probably hear this a lot, but you are an amazing writer, this is my first time reading a story by you and I'm going to check out your other stories right now! Don't ever stop writing, you are one of the best writers I have ever read a story by on

Awe. That's so sweet :)

I. Am. Speechless. That. Was. Beautiful. *sniff*

This is like my 50th time reading this! I love it!:)