Please update

Lol keep this going its great

Please update

please continue this story soon

please continue this story soon

please continue this story soon

Not finished why?

The chapter is great! Amazing! Simply amazing! I love your writing and i love this story!I hope you update really soon. !I can't wait to read update soon! :)

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The chapter is great! Amazing! Simply amazing

I like the plot line but i feel like it was rushed to much maybe when you get time you can go back and work on slow the events down a bit but good job it was a very intresting story!

oh no I wonder what is going to happen to Jasper after he has man handled one of Bella's children. They were just getting Esme for killing their family. I wonder if Bella will find Esme and bring her back for trial. I wonder if Carlisle knew this about his wife. So I guess she will also deal with \Jasper but he didn't know that he is her child.

wow I wonder what has happened to Rosalie when she drank from Bree, very interesting. Rosalie isn't human is she. I hope that they go back as McCarty and leave the Cullen's alone and they leave them alone as well. I guess they will be shocked to see Bella crowned as a queen right.

wow the rest of the Cullen's are not good vampires very judgemental. Yet they aren't perfect. Maybe Rosalie and Emmett should leave them as well. then there would be only four of them right. I wonder how they knew Bella was dead.