i could just kick Renee and Charlie both and Edward is such a selfish prick, only seeing what he wants to see. but then again he is only seventeen and he's never HAD to grow up. i don't think Carlisle ans Esme have done him any favors, any of them really by treating them like children. Rose is a prime example, having temper tantrums and lashing out, not to mention hitting her husband when she's embarrassed by his behavior or ignoring him when she's angry or doesn't agree with her every whim. they would really be better off as a coven and not a family.

This is amazing. I haven’t read a fanfiction like this in ages! Thank you for this. :)

Beautiful.

I absolutely adore stories than hone in on Bella's familial relationship with the others, and bring up how she didn't just lose the love of her life, she lost her chance to finally be part of a family and taken care of. This was fantastic and I'm so glad I had the chance to read it. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it!

Okay, so I really like this story. The only things I wish you had done different was make the story longer, and split the chapters up into points of view better. Such is do chapter ones Bella POV, and Edward POV. I do thing this story would have also been really good if maybe With Edward POV that you start after the beginning with Edward being on the hunt with Esme, Alice, Rosalie, and Jasper. And then have him notice Alice keeping things from him, and Esme and Jasper leaving, and then things from Edwards POV when Emmett shows up to show him what is going on with Bella, and then him and Emmett waiting to be told they could come home, then waiting for Bella to wake up, and then when Bella wakes up and tells him more of his story, and then maybe end it with an epilogue that either ends with him finding out Bella is bullied by Lauren and Jessica, and how things work out for them(meaning does Bella get better and he stops worrying as much). I do think this story is really good, that was a few things I thought would make it better.

Awesome story. Thank you for sharing.

Poor Bella! This was bringing all the feels.

Reading this again for like...the 7th time! So good!

Beautiful story so beautiful thanks for sharing

This was a fantastic read well done

I loved this story SO much, so sad it's over but incredibly happy that you wrote it!

Could you please carry on with the story...I am not ready for this to come to an end...I would really love to read for more certainties! Please it's a humble request to you!

I absolutely love this story. It was a rollercoaster of emotions and I related to her sadness so much. It was simply amazing. A story I’m willing to read over and over again!

I really, really love this story. It is one of my favorites and I have read it multiple times.

Wow. This story is incredible. You did an amazing job weaving the emotions throughout. I truly didn’t want it to end.