Reviews for Our Entwined Lives
Bloodfreakk chapter 34 . 4/25
Man, this was such a good read.
The charactersgreat, plotgreat, I loved it
May chapter 17 . 8/25/2018
so... I'v stumbled upon your story and really wanted to leave a comment. It's well written and the way you've built the world, the ruthless rules and mindset of rich people, and Eris struggle make it seem so real and believable.
Her slowly growing relationship with Kyoya is a pleasure to read, and her friendship with Honey and Mori is heartwarming.
so... thank you for writing this sory!
Best of wishes .
3454737455677 chapter 34 . 7/16/2018
Words cannot describe how grateful I am to have stumbled upon your story. It was touching in a way that I knew every single word came from your heart, and it truly moved me. I learned something new from each chapter I read, whether it be new vocabulary or a valuable life lesson. I loved the way you stayed true to each of the hosts' personalities, and I feel that Eri's character blended in with their antics nicely. I relate to Eri on so many levels, particularly in regards to her reflective and reserved nature. The story progressed very naturally, as did Eri and Kyoya's relationship. Your writing is sincere, heartfelt, and profound, and you have inspired me to start writing again. I hope you continue to write amazing stories, and that you find happiness in life just like Eri. Take care~
vermillion14517 chapter 34 . 5/23/2018
This story was so beautiful and enjoyable to read. As a freshman in college, it was refreshing to go back and read something like this. Everything was incredibly well-written and detailed, and I couldn't put this down for the past couple days. Even though I've been cramming for exams and working, I made time to read this because it took me away from life for a bit and into the life of another. I was so thoroughly enamored by this story that I would've forgotten it to be an Ouran fic if not for the mentions of the Ouran characters. If you ever write an original story, or have written one, I will make sure to read it. I'm going to go check out your other stories as well 3 You know that empty, reflective feeling after reading a really good book? That's what I'm feeling right now haha
mingxingxing chapter 1 . 4/15/2018
Just some clarification. Ouran do have lockers. Some schools in Japan have.
crazyweaslygirl chapter 34 . 1/21/2018
I have to thank you for this amaziiiing story. Everything was perfect, The characters, writing everything. Like you said in the beginning there are too much stories that are pretty much the same, just with different names. It was really done more realistic, and i actually really liked that. So thank you once again, lot's of love :D 3
Murry1209 chapter 1 . 9/3/2017
This is one of the best fan fictions I think I have ever read, and let me tell you I have read A LOT of fan fiction. Thank you for putting this out there. I legitimately cried multiple times, and am now going to emerge myself in all of your other works. Thank you so much ️
themantisaura chapter 34 . 8/6/2017
You said your goal was to make this story relatable, and I think you did an excellent job of making it that way. I really liked that this wasn't an extreme romance story.
animemangafangirl23 chapter 34 . 8/5/2017
I read Thisbe story in two days and I've fallen in love with it. This has to be one of the best OHSHC fanfiction I have ever read. Also, all the emotions put into this and deep thinking made me tear up involved more than one occasion! Overall, this is an incredible book! Thank you!
BlackDove WhiteDove chapter 33 . 7/30/2017
Ahh so sweet :)
kittycat69 chapter 34 . 7/19/2017
can't say enough how much i LOVED LOVED LOVED this whole story from start to finish! thanks for the great read!
BlackDove WhiteDove chapter 32 . 7/18/2017
This was such a beautiful and relaxing story.
It was almost like a nice warm cup of tea for me. It had moments of trouble and twists and turns, but it was still so smooth.
I'm very happy I have come across something like this on ff.
aryan778 chapter 34 . 5/27/2017
I've read this today and I've got to say that at first I was sceptical about reading an OC x OHSHC fic but god it just exceeded my expectations. There's something about the simplicity and real-ness about the characters that drew me in especially in Eri which I think kinda reminds me a bit of myself (her inner turmoils are so relatable). Love that you didn't rush in Kyoya's relationship with Eri, which I think is fresh coming from OHSHC ficsit's really tiring to read fics that always has that love-at-first-sight theme or the gut-wrenching-exploding-romance in it.
Again, I think that this is a really great slow-burn fic that will make you feel satisfied till the end. Thank you for uploading this and sharing it with usI truly enjoyed it.
Amarenima Redwood chapter 32 . 4/24/2017
I absolutly love this story! It was very realistic and human. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
Saturn10710 chapter 1 . 3/30/2017
This story is honestly one of the best fanfics I've ever read. I remember coming across this story a long time ago and loving it so much. Today I was just browsing through OCxKyoya fics when I remembered this one and wanted to revisit it. It's now on my favorite's list because this story is such a gem. I love Eri, and found myself relating to her several times. You made her character well rounded and made her seem like a real person. And I like how the story progressed through their lives and how Eri and Kyoya's relationship progressed gradually throughout the years, making it seem realistic. I mean, there's nothing wrong with the usual dramatic, polar opposites type stories about KyoyaxOC but this story ended up being so much more meaningful than any of them. And now my dreams of writing a KyoyaxOC fic have been squashed because now I can't imagine him with anyone except Eri haha.
You're characters were so real and ahhhfhdubdiw I'm sorry I just love this too much for words.
~Saturn10710~
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