sad that this is where it ends, but it was fun while it lasted.

could others make a

Very nice.

Not bad

Just finished reading. MEGA cool. Looking forward to the sequel and anything else you've written. Keep being awesome.

...they didn't even check to see if there were slaves or other captives inside before blowing it up.
What the hell.

An absolutely great short story. I really wish I could write stories that are easy to finish, too. Without them turning out as several chapters of rushed junk, one-shots or long stories that I ultimately don't have the energy to finish in any reasonable timeframe.

Well written and well thought out. I enjoyed it. I would have loved a much larger expansion, but as it stands I am content.

Heh. Nice story. A little bit too interesting for a short story for my tastes. And you're right, you are a bad, bad man. But you know what? I'm not letting you taste any of my anguish. Instead, I'll just full-out praise your story for it's awesomeness and how it doesn't have to be any longer! But wait. That just gives you sweet, sweet praise instead of anguish. Curse you.

Really great story, I can't wait o read the sequel! :)

damb this was good. Look forward to reading your other stories! :)

At last a final conclusion to a great story! It seems you took up my idea. You truly are a great storyteller.

This was a great Epilogue, satisfied our desire for closure, but as you said left it wide open for more.

to bad they still can't talk yet to each other .

though its the first fallout/mass effect crossover ive read it sets a high standard for the rest, i hope you decide to make that sequel, this was a great read