An interesting start to the story, hooking the reader by making them want to find out more about who Vela is and what lies ahead for her. A new reader would definitely think that she will be caught and her secrets would be revealed.

Boring stuff aside, I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to how the plot unfolds.

Great story sofar, but i do wonder if wrathion will be in this story later on..

C'mon, Vela. Kick Zarefrion's ass.

DL;FJKG
VELA HAD A MATE
I'M FREAKING JUST
OVERLOAD
SDFJKL

Ah so he returns! I was wondering for a long time what his role was way back in the earlier chapters. For a while I thought she was glimpsing part of the future, hence her confusion as to who he was and the other dragons near her. But its actually a fragment of the past! How exciting. Now there's so many questions in my head surrounding the black dragons past. Guess ill just have to wait until next time!

Whoa that was an awesome chapter, but I don't like how she refers to the others as her friends when she has just met them, even if she knew the goblin from before.

NUOOOOOOOOO Just as I started liking the gnome he got himself killed! D8 what a shame that was. I miss reading stories like this. I don't see a lot with such good plot and character development like this story has. Cant wait until the next chapter :D Keep at it!

HAHA YUS! Thanks for the shoutout :D I'm glad the backpack idea was able to help you! The plan was pulled out very well. I only wonder what the conversation in Darnassian (sp?) was like. Probably "whats in the bag" "...food...", "what kind of food?", "...Good food that I intend to eat later" lol. I missed when you updated this chapter, so ill be reading and reviewing the next one right away :D That Mr. BrassBucket is a very smart gnome...almost too smart. I hope that he will become a valuable friend in the future.

*flails*
AAAH!
MIRI'S GONNA GET DOWN TO BUSINESS!
I eagerly await the next chapter most impatiently.

Squee! . .! I love this, especially Vela.

Yay! You updated!
*victory cheer*

I like Tyrisi. She's nice.

Damn it not Dalgris.

If it were me id change into a gnome real quick and hide in that backpack XD

C'MON VELA!
BEAT THE CRAP OUTTA HIM!
*starts flailing*
Update!
THIS ISS KILLING ME O.O

Two words make... more... THIS WAS AN EPIC CHAPTER! :D