Reviews for A typical day in the life of Harry Potter
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Guest chapter 1 . 4/5/2019
There's a story by CL Moore that had a premise similar to this. A man is visited by two potential children. each has come from an extreme future that appeals to the child in question. One militant and "glorious", the other peaceful and stagnant. He chose a third way, a third wife.

I thought of it immediately seeing the description blurb for your tale.
zugrian chapter 1 . 7/2/2018
This is a wonderful one-shot. Loved seeing Lucy again, and your choices other his other kids & potential wives were great. Since you've done the story with Lillian Summers, it would be interesting to see a story where he ends up with either Susan or Fleur some day too.

I thoroughly agree with not acknowledging the awful epilogue too.
DragonTamer01 chapter 1 . 3/2/2016
Sometimes a purposefully vague endings works, and sometimes it doesn't. For me, this was one time where it kind of didn't completely work for me, but I still loved the entire story.

Wonderful job.
senawario chapter 1 . 8/16/2015
what terrible spelling - and it's not long words either. Utterly careless...

"piece and quit"? I quit!
Silky Button chapter 1 . 7/28/2015
haha pretty interesting
Saissa chapter 1 . 6/27/2015
Ripple Effect is also one of my most favourite Stargate episodes as well.. Very interesting story!
WhiteElfElder chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
Definitely an interesting take on "ripple effect".
Araytigre chapter 1 . 4/28/2014
One must be very careful how you state an incantation, particularly if you're not sure about the translation. All in all, things turned out great for Harry, and I personally think that it was Hermione that he ended up with, but any of the Girls would have been great too. It was a fun read. Thank You. TTFN
cookiedo95 chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
i'm confused. Does he end up with all the girls?
jupimako chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
That was a fun read!
HP.HG. fan forever chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
Okay, so you didn't tell us who you had him marry, but one important fact was left out I think. What happened to the horcrux in Harry's scar? This could be a guide for a more detailed fic.
Jonn Wolfe chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
Loved this!
Akuma-Heika chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
After she finished the chant she repeated it four more time before suddenly a large door materialised in front of her.
Why five times? Not magical. Suggest 3 or 7.

only the dazed looking five people behind.
Where did the other four come from?

Really like this but wish it was longer. Funny ending even if it was doable considering the modified timeline.

I also was really REALLY tempted to add Albus Severus Potter to the list of kids if only to type out Harry's and Snape's reaction to the name, but in the end I decided against it as it would mean acknowledging the epilogue.
You should have definitely have done it. It would have been hilarious!

I am not sure if there is an official definition of what an alternative reality is, but for the sake of the fic I went with the whole for every choice you make a new reality is created.
I have heard that there are technical differences in the definition of alternate reality and alternate universe but the difference is mostly technical and really only quantum physicists can understand the difference.

indecent! Harry cliché that I really like.
indecent! Harry cliche? Do you mean a rapist Harry?

The last one to be added was Adeline who was a bit off a joke.
Based on their characters I think it was realistic...and in some ways more realistic than canon. She wound the 2-3 year difference with Harry to be huge so why would she even look at a guy a decade her senior?

A child from a really where Harry was born a female (and thus was the mother), a child with a girl who in his reality is a boy,
These would have been hilarious as well. If you did a femDraco I would have used it as a way for him to get close with Narcissa lol!

Pretty sure he would have had more kids considering it was peace time.
ak chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
un enfant de luna aurait pu être amusant!
dumby aime bien sacrifier un coté lumière ou même plus s'il peut convertir un coté sombre vers la lumière!
pendant la première guerre il a récuperé snape, bien sur beaucoup sont morts pour un succès!
il était pret a sacrifier toute l'école pour draco!
comme disait hermione : les sorciers n'ont aucune logique!
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