| Reviews for Second Chance as a Pirate |
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   PikaMew1288 chapter 9 . 3/4/2019 Xion really should call Nami out on her ridiculous BS by pointing out that she ask her to buy things for her, so Nami can't call interest above 200 belli without being called stingy. Also, Xion never signed a contract that she WOULD have to pay interest. Xion should also point out that ridiculous debts is a quick way to get on someone's bad side and in a world like One Piece, you should avoid doing that as much as possible unless you are as OP as Sephiroth. |
| MysticSpider chapter 4 . 6/19/2018 ...Question, why did you make someone who excels at magic give up the Mystic trait? Wouldn't she be more inclined to amplify it instead? |
| harlequin320 chapter 18 . 1/30/2015 Interesting crossover, onward to part 2 |
| dolphindiamnds chapter 5 . 7/13/2014 ...WHAT DA FUQ DID I JUST READ? |
| Shock The System chapter 6 . 4/5/2014 meow wow |
| Will chapter 18 . 8/16/2013 That was a nice story, and the plot is interesting. To combine Xion's story with dream eaters is really clever, and I can't wait to hear more of organization 13. Will she meet Roxas? Or maybe Sora in his journey to save all the worlds. I have to ask, will Xion have more than just 1 type of keyblade or is her current one is the default one? Anyway keep up the good work and I await your next chapter |
| jonjames427 chapter 5 . 7/30/2013 You know that someone else in the one piece universe already has the suke suke fruit. |
| DejDem chapter 18 . 7/12/2013 Really liked this story (though I am not a fan the Warship Island Filler Arc) but I can't wait to read the sequel and see Xion's interactions with the crew. |
| DejDem chapter 10 . 7/12/2013 Why would Xion run back to the ship if she is going to be one of the crews main fighters along side the 'Monster Trio', and where does she stand on the strength scale? Luffy obviously is strongest overall of course but is she at the same strength as Zoro and Sanji or will she be weaker? |
| DejDem chapter 9 . 7/12/2013 I like this story, but the dialogue for the villains like Alturo and Haxel in the last chapter just seems...idk juvenile. They don't sound like adult men like they are told to be, rather their insults really just sound like the kind of cliched anime bully or child. Other than that I wish some of the scenes were more descriptive like the expressions people go through and stuff, but this is a really interesting idea. |
| Gamelover41592 chapter 18 . 7/11/2013 that was great |
| ShadicZX chapter 6 . 7/11/2013 im late with this. the pegaasus and unicorn |
| Gamelover41592 chapter 17 . 7/5/2013 that was great |
| Gamelover41592 chapter 16 . 6/28/2013 that was good but you forgot to say "the first person to run out of time is the loser" |
| Gamelover41592 chapter 15 . 6/22/2013 well that went well can the next challenge be a time limit challenge? |
