Reviews for Fading Away
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 2/9/2017
that was good keep the chapters coming
TheOlympus chapter 2 . 1/13/2017
Damn it.. Why you didnt continue this?!
Las chapter 2 . 4/15/2014
Oooohh I love this story XD but you HAVE to give up narutos idententy at some point ya know...
D-user20 chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
I love how you portray Minato. People write him as goody shoes next door boy too much it's sickening. Your style too Awww! Update soon pwetty please? I got the impression your abandoning this. Sad how good writings sometimes is discontinued. I seriously need more! I get it that they treat strangers with precaution but come on, Hiruzen killing off Naruto? Our lovely Blondie?
ytygr chapter 2 . 9/15/2013
geez just when it was getting good hope there is an update soon
fingers-falling-upwards chapter 2 . 8/5/2013
Ooh this is such a fascinating set-up. I really hope we get to see the plot reach it's high point. Thanks so much for posting this story!
ougley chapter 2 . 7/30/2013
thanks :)
God Of Cake chapter 2 . 7/15/2013
I like this! Update soon!
Nagato wannabe chapter 2 . 6/26/2013
t'was an interesting read
Nagato wannabe chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
why not just eliminate him now if his already captured? As far as Sarutobi knows he is a captured nin, a very capable nin but still a captured one.
Crystalzap chapter 2 . 6/17/2013
wow so Minato is set to kill Naruto on his "Jiji's" order that'll suck when he finds out... not that they any chance of succeeding especially if Kurama (in Kushina) is anywhere nearby; he'd sense that. Even if Naruto couldn't beat EVERYONE I'm sure he could escape.
TomHawk chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
I'd love this more if you add more more troubles than fluff cuz I love trouble yeah
kurokazeryuu chapter 2 . 5/21/2013
Very interesting story.
I really wish you didn't add the one sided minato/naruto though... Even if both are oblivious to it, plus minato already have kushina... Idk. I just feel like he didn't care/love as much for kushina if his feelings can waver. Plus not to mention, it's almost bordering on incest... I can let siblings, cousins, and maybe aunt/uncle slide; but I can't let parents slide. It just rub me the wrong way. Btw, I'm totally fine with genfic. I'd rather instead of one sided minanaru, why can't there be a family connection kind of feeling instead...
Glassstar93 chapter 2 . 5/15/2013
update soon plz! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
MarkerIV chapter 2 . 5/8/2013
So many of these Naruto meets his father fics being released this month. I have to say I love them all! (yours included!) Cannot wait to see more.
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