What a beautiful idea. This would make for a beautiful intro to a novel.

It should be turned into a story. Very good one-shot.

Fairy circles and dancing til you drop. A lovely fic.

I freaking love this.

Forced to dance with your nemesis for possibly the rest of your life. That is a chilling thought.

Wow, that was a really good one shot! It was very well written, and you did a good job with imagery. Of course, you could always go back and make it a chapter fic if you wanted, but this is good as it is.

As I mentioned on the other site, still think this is your best work yet. Though I know most readers (outside of fanfic) won't appreciate 3rd Omni POV, I think you wrote it beautifully. It captures the needed distance and suspicion without losing the tension. Bravo!