YOU'RE A GREAT WRITER! :) I LOVE READING ABOUT HAWKE AND FENRIS! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

The writing of this tale is deep, crisp, echoing and cold. Sharp angles reverberating harshly. Unique, appealing and very well done.

So happy to see another chapter to this! And it's just as beautifully told and sad as the preceding ones. I am very curious where this story will end up, and will Hawke ever finally find peace. Keep up the good work!

You are beautiful writer. If it means reading more chapters like this (and the ones that came before), I don't mind the wait.

Wow... this is powerful. Very descriptive and intense, helps me to imagine how complicated Hawke's situation is and how she feels at the end of Act 3. I love your writing style, you have a way of describing the details that draws the reader right in. Thank you for sharing!

That is really beautifully written... and so sad...

Oh, this is beautiful. Your prose is otherworldly.

You are brilliant and a beautiful writer.

Beautiful! I love it! So happy to see another chapter to this. I hope there will be more soon.

Beautiful :)

This was beautifully written! Stunning, captured in brief glimpses. I love your imagery and the mood you have set in this story. It reminds me of how I feel about my Hawke and her Fenris in my story Broken Bonds, but because you set this up in a one-shot fashion, I feel like it works so much better.

Well done! One of my favorites.

Keep writing.

-Seras

Oh my gosh! *wipes tears from eyes* I love how poetic and sad this is! You told it so well, and I found myself reading it aloud so I could really hear it. Wonderful!