Name:Lilly Jackson
Godly Parent:Poseidon
Hair:Straight black hair that goes to her occasionally keeps it in a ponytail.
Skin:Medium skin skin is flawless except for the scar across her right eye.
Hight:5 feet 0 inches.
weight: About 90 pounds(She is not so skinny to where it's gross but she never ate much.)
Powers:Anything with water, able to summon a trident,the worlds best swordfighter, she can summon lightning although she passes out for about a day.
Personality:She is extreamly over protective of her brother Percy and her friends and she was ten she ran away to fight gods and monsters that tried to kill Percy and was able to keep them off for 7 years.(She is five years older than Percy).She is kind of a push over when it comes to her friends and family but to the gods she is stubborn hard headed and is sarcastic and funny ,yet fun to be around. She loves to be outside and loves to sword is fearless, she would get right up in Kronos's face and curse him has never been defeated.
In a realationship:Yes with Hermes.

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Name: Zoe hummingbird
Godly parent: Apollo
Hair: brown
Skin: tan
Height : 4.7
Weight: 30
Powers: very good with bow and arrow and can sing well
About her:
Her mother died at birth. She was given to a foster family were she lived until they were killed in a burglary . Felling alone she convinces herself she was bad luck and turned anorexic . After getting help she went back to foster care where two more foster care parents died in different accidents .

She started taking archery lessons and was a natural . Soon after discovering she was daughter of apollos . She went to camp half blood where se was informed her half brother was killed. She has only told one person this secret she keeps hidden from the rest of the world( you decide who she tells)

She comes off as sweet and beautiful to people at first But once u get to no her she is kind and has a talent for stealth . You can trust her to keep a secret and be there if u are hurt . She is brave and is currently making a plan for vengeance for her half brother.

Name: Ashleigh 'Ash' Riverstone

Godly parent: Hermes

Hair: Dirty Blond but the tips are died bright red

Skin: tanned

Hight: 5'6

Weight: 101 lbs

Powers: She can pick locks, she is like the queen of pranks, she can be really stealthy and with her father being the god of travel she is really fast and can speak in almost any language

Personality (at least three paragraphs): She is one of those people who is always laughing and is never seen without a smile. She is defiantly a trouble-maker but is a very valuable friend. She loves pranking people and uses her skills from her father to help her. She is the type of person who is super stubborn and you can never change her mind once it is set.
However, no one can ever live without any problems. When the subject about her past is brought up she tends to get very secretive and tries to change the subject. She doesn't like it when people try to figure things out about her and don't mind their own business.
But, she does think it is find for her to dig into other people's business. She believes a lot of things but often just turns around and says but it doesn't apply to me. She is often told as a free spirit, and isn't very considerate of others.
She is also a very skilled fighter and can often beat some of the best at camp. SHe likes to fight and show off because many people think that since she is just a hermes child she won't be the best fighter around, so kicking peoples butts in the arena is a good way for her to get her point across. She also likes Martial Arts, and many people confuse her with a child of Ares. She inherited the thief side of her father and is also very very very rebellious in just about everything. Some times she will be against something just for the sake of being against something.

In A Relationship? Do you want them in one?: No she is not in a relationship, but she needs to be in one. She would probably need someone who can help balance her out and keep her grounded. Also it should be a person who isn't nearly as confident as she is because she has enough for both of them. It should almost be someone who is her oppisite so they can balance each other out.

Yeah, I do support Jeyna a lot over Jasper. I don't think Piper and Jason make a good pair at all. Thanks for reading my character, and I hope you chose her.

Name: Vivian Maria Williams

Godly parent: Dionysius

Hair: Vivian has bleached blonde hair (it used to be brown but she bleached it, much against her mothers wishes) The tips of her hair are dyed a vibrant purple. Her hairs very wavy and it goes down to her lower back.

Skin: Vivian is extremely pale and burns very easily. She has light freckles going across her nose.

Hight: Vivian is on the shorter side and stands at 4'12.

Weight: 95 pounds.

Powers: Vivian can manipulate grape vines an strawberry vines. She can make people feel and act drunk but this drains a lot of her energy if she's already been battling, sometimes she uses it to mess with people but not often.

Personality (at least three paragraphs): Vivian is a bit of a rebel, she never had a "role model" while growing up, her mom resented her for being born (let's just say Vivian was a bit of an oopsie) none the less her mom does try to keep a relationship going with her, although Vivian doesn't appreciate her efforts. Vivian is very sarcastic and witty, she is extremely stubborn and argues with people constantly.

She can be very picky about certain things, especially food (She's a vegetarian and doesn't like a lot of foods) she loves party's (she is a daughter of Dionysius) she tries to refrain from drinking, but every teenager gives in once or twice.

Vivian gets along with most people, but she doesn't get along well with types like Annabeth, they don't get along what so ever. She loves pranking and messing around.

In A Relationship? Do you want them in one?: yes please :)

Hi! I love doing these things and can't wait to read your story- even if you don't pick my character!

Name: Soladat Wrekk

Godly parent: Ares

Hair: mid-back, light brown, side bangs to the right, in a ponytail w/bangs out

Skin: Ivory

Height: 5'4

Weight: 125 LB

Powers: Blood Rage- can increase speed, agility, and strength for a short amount of time (up to four minutes max)

Personality (at least three paragraphs):
She's a bit insane from growing up on the streets alone, but she tries to hide it by not talking so much. She tends to talk to herself quietly without realizing it and she never stands still. With a very short temper, she doesn't have many friends as people try to stay away from her.
Her emotions come and go, as she is bipolar. She tries to hide it, but has been known to let it out when anxious.
She's not much of a people person, and doesn't care for animals (having a fear of birds), but simply smiles and nods. When speaking, she'll pause for a while, unsure of how to continue without being rude and if she should stop. Not used to people liking her.

In A Relationship? Do you want them in one?: Not in a relationship, but you can put her in one if you chose my character.
I really can't wait for your story, even if you don't pick my character! I've been looking for a good Percy Jackson story with an OC!

oh if I didn't say if I supported Jeyna or not, yeah I think it's better than Jasper.

Name: Rhya Kennet

Godly parent: Nemesis

Hair: Dark brown,choppy,just below chin

Skin: Tan

Height: 5'8

Weight: Average, she never has time to check

Powers: Rhya will alwats,always get ger revenge.

Personality (at least three paragraphs):
To sum up Rhya's personality in one word, it would be distrustful.
She was thrown out bybher father when she was 13, and came to CHB at 14. Rhya fought with Kronos on the second Titan War, but is still at camp now, though she is very much distrusted.

She can be a sarcastic,troublemaker bitch, but Rhya also has a funny, sweet side which she has shows to about three people. And all but one betrayed her. The three being Chiron, Luke and her father. Most of the campers' distrust borders on,or is already, hate.

In A Relationship? Do you want them in one?: No, and no.

Other: JEYNA RULES!

Can my oc be there?

Name: Cynthia Heartfox

Age: 14

Godly parent: Apollo
(Can it be any of the maiden godesses?)

Hair: Long silky black wavy hair that goes to her waist
She usually has it in two high pigtails but sometimes its loose or in a braid

Eyes: Dark blue intense eyes

Skin: A little tan

Body: A little curvy and slim

Height: 5.4

Weight: 35

Powers: She has pretty good sight and hearing and is very agile
She hits the bulls-eye almost everytime

Personality: She is a hyper girl
She is full of energy and can be all over the place
She is nice and respects people but can be intruding on personal space
She can be a good listener and give good advice
She loves helping people and is enthusiastic
She doesnt get so many compliments so she blushes when she gets one
She is also very popular but she doesnt let it get to her head
She likes teasing people about it though
She never misses a chance to tease people and can make pretty good comebacks
She only gets serious when someone of her friends is hurt

In a relationship: No, but she can have one
Can she be in a relationship with Percylia22's character 'Nathan'?
Only if its okay for Percylia22

Can she be there?

Name: Marco Cervi

Godly parent: Mars

Hair:Black, military-cut

Skin: Olive Tan

Height: 6'2"

Weight: 195 lbs

Powers: enhanced reflexes, learns battle skills unnaturally quick, good tactician, has god-like mastery of the sword and equally talented unarmed

Personality (at least three paragraphs): He is a very grim and stoic person and usually prefers to be training or fighting than anything else. While not really a happy person, he can be charming when he wants to be. He enjoys using his muscular build, scars, tattoos and fighting abilities to pick up women in the mortal world.

He usually talks in a calm, controlled manner but swears excessively and yells when angry or giving orders in battle, often in Italian or Latin. After a battle he enjoys hanging out and getting some R&R with other fighters. He can be rather sentimental at times and is very close with his mortal family.

He doesn't trust people very easily, but once someone has earned his trust he will lighten up when with them. He often uses his size and reputation to intimidate other people when challenged but will usually prefer to fight them. He has no problem with killing as long as the person or people deserve it and he will do what he has to to accomplish his goals.

In A Relationship? Do you want them in one?: No. Yes. He is straight.
And I definitely support Jeyna. I absolutely hate Jasper. Too unreal.

Name:Aneira

Godly parent:Khione

Hair:Medium brown, waist length, naturally wavy, usually either in a side ponytail or over her shoulders in loose curls w/ a side swept bang

Skin:Pale w/ a slight tan

Eyes:Bright icy pale blue

Body:Slim but curvy and busty

Height:5'6

Weight:125

Powers:She can manipulate ice, create snow & blizzards, make rain into incredibly sharp icicles, make shields out of ice, freeze or conceal anything/anyone in frost, resistant to sub-zero temperatures, shoot ice shards from her hands, generate ice and snow from nothing, make something so cold it feels like it's burning, has charm speak but her voice brings fear and is cold like ice

Personality (at least three paragraphs):She is often a smart asx and really sarcastic but once you get to know her she is really funny and smart too. She has a very short fiery temper which usually comes out at the wrong times and she puts her family and friends safety above her own. Even though she is very pretty she isnt conceited (not that much) and stuck up.
She loves to sing and art, she is also very sly and a great actor, she can trick anyone with fake tears, big smile or act like she just broke some ribs. She isn't very fond or really mean people and bullies so she knows how to stick up for herself (either with words or her fists).
Always has to let out a sarcastic remark here & there, doesnt take crap from anyone and is very feisty. She is also outspoken, reckless, stubborn as a mule and has trust issues but she's just a very fun, cool, loving person at heart. Swears like a sailor

In A Relationship? Do you want them in one?:No. Yes

Name: Nathan

Godly parent: Hades

Hair: Ink Black with blondish tips

Skin: Deathly pale

Hight: 6 foot 4

Weight: 116 lb.

Powers: Shadow travel, Make shadow warriors, Summon skeletons/Ghosts/Dead people, talk to hell hounds, heal with shadows, communicate through shadows.

Personality: Nathan is a loner to most campers who dont know him very well. He doesnt really participate in any camp activities(Only capture the flag), And he usually blocks out campers.
But when he's with his friends, he acts like a normal demigod teenade boy. He plays pranks on people, plays ToD, and messes around. He's really immature and thinks wrong most of the time.
He also knows when to be serious. When a friend is having problems with other people or with personal stuff, he's always there to help them. Like if a boy dumps one of his friends (thats a girl) for another girl, he will go and beat the c**p out of him. He is always there for a friend.
On his free time he writes, draws, or creates songs.

He is not in a relationship, but I want him to be in one.