You have a spelling error in your summary. It should be 'Sasuke comes back to the Leaf. When everyone turns on him, even Sakura, he feels like a burden. Will he die? Will he live?' Feels, not fills. Otherwise it's great. ;D

what happens i need to no

You should have more chapters and more detail, this story is REALLY good and I love it but please consider writing more, it would make a good chaptered story :) x

I like this but its marked as complete when it really isn't...