very cool twists!

I am loving the concept behind this. It's just a shame that you dropped it.

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

I am liking the off the beaten path nature of this story, it seams quite unique.

Thats original and pretty interesting. Would love to see an update to this story. Too bad all your stories look abandoned.

Difícil pero Hermoso...
seria grandioso una batalla épica entre Hermione(Elizabeth) y Voldemort, espero un poco mas de acción por parte de Hermione
sigue adelante espero con ansias el próximo capitulo

I'm not I'm looking at your arse as you zoomed past me that's all
Brilliant thank you

This is great! Following

I'm sensing a budding *Slap* *Slap* *Kiss* relationship between these two...

Me like-y!

I like it.

What a great story idea, hope you come back to this and add to it soon.

Great start. Have you given up on this story? Just when you established the rules? I hope not.

It's an interesting idea for a story. I can see it being difficult to write later chapters though, since it seems like Voldemort will be out of the picture pretty quickly. Then the story would either focus on wizarding world reformation, which can get boring, or a new source of conflict will have to arise.

The start has been entertaining though. I enjoyed seeing Hermione's thought process change as she merged more with Saltrian.

oh, awesome. I like this story. I'll follow it. Please, update soon...

Really enjoying this, was wondering if you could do an Omake for various people's reactions to learning that she taught grindelwald and dumbledore?