I absolutely loved this story

This chapter made me cry...glad hotch fixed things
Men can be so clueless sometimes

Oh man Emily's pain breaks my heart

The phone sex was amazing ...you should share all 20 versions..

Im just reading this story for the first time and its just so perfect! The way you write Emily & Hotch is just so spot on, each chapter is like watching an episode

I loved it. It is a great story.

Great story! I enjoyed it!

Uau! Você escreve muito bem. Obrigada por compartilhar conosco. Essa é sua melhor história de hotchniss. Siga escrevendo. Abraços

Damn I hope she's able to stay with him one day

Wow glad they had that night and that he wrote that note

Very enticing and enjoyable! Wonderful work!
Thanks for sharing!
lilylynn

To say I enjoyed reading this simply would not do you justice. Having been in a long distance relationship (with a co-worker, no less), you captured the pain...and the pleasure...that can accompany such a journey.

From a CM standpoint, it would have been lovely to have seen how the team found out - except for JJ and her smug look from the bar when she apparently figured it allllll out.

I love the continuation of this story. Perhaps pregnancy hormones coming up? ;)

I see there are 12 chapters here. Just read the first two. May read more later.

You are not just capable as a writer: the grammar, spelling, etc. bit; you are a very accomplished author of erotica. I've written some love scenes, myself, and I know how hard it is to do that creatively and plausibly while keeping it classy and not descending into the smut that one finds in the sort of paperback novels sold in truck stops. You achieve that. Frankly, I think the best erotica is usually written by women. Men are usually too embarrassed to try, although I have and hope that I managed reasonably well. But I think you've done better.

Oh: as for poor Hotch almost not being able to find a corkscrew, you might equip him with a Swiss Army knife in one of the less complex, more pocketable models. The thick ones need to go in a car glove box or briefcase, perhaps in their handy little leather SOS Kit, which adds some useful items. The only true Swiss brand left is Victorinox, and I suggest their Spartan model for an everyday carry pocketknife. Does the corkscrew really work? Yes, everything on those knives does what it should, and some blades do even more than they're billed to do. E.g., the corkscrew is also useful to loosen knots.

If this is all I can find to add about your writing, it must be pretty good. Please do try to maintain reasonable modesty in the face of this exuberant praise. The only real criticism is that the opening paragraph or so was a bit disjointed and I had to concentrate a little until I was engrossed in the tale. And a bit more detail about Emily's lingerie might be both arousing and revealing of her personality. (Yes, many of my fantasy women are Victoria's Secret models...but, seriously, I wonder at times what the BAU women wear under their clothes and their official competence. Garcia excepted!)

Not bad, eh? (Sorry, but I think I noticed that you're Canadian. Couldn't resist teasing about that.)

Wow, they are just so hot and so in love!