This second chapter was very good. It hit home hoe everyone loves Krillin and yet the poor guy deals with all the pain.

This story tho it should be animated into a show

if you'e not making this a multichapter fic, can i branch off from it? as in can i make my own fic based off of this one? it might be released in like, 12 years and it might be crappy but i'd like to try imagining their friendship

This is really good. Emotional, believable and very sad at the end. I always liked Jeice.

I love it! Great story XD

Awesome one-shot and look into the past of Vegeta and Jeice growing up together under the Cold family rule. A shame Jeice didn't switch sides but from his point of view it made sense not to, especially he wasn't aware of the power house that was going to be brought back to defeat Frieza but I got to admire his loyalty while not throwing away his morals or virtues.

Loved it lolita! U should do a gohan vegeta fic but if that's not ur type I understand :)

He says to Guldo, "Do it again and I'll cut your head off." Epic foreshadowing...

Aww tears in the morning...
Absolutely adored this, beautiful work.

so cute kid veg and kid jeice :)