This was lovely! I enjoyed it very much.

Ohmygosh my feelings! You totally captured the essence of these characters and the delicate gossamer of the whole film! I love this so much, the sentimentality and that wonderful ending! You gave such wonderful closure to these two, I adored this, this was everything I hoped a later meeting between them would be. Thank you.

Fantastic piece. I love seeing your projections for their future. Well done!

Oh, thank you very much for this incrediable story :) It's so nice and cosy. It will be amazing if you find the inspiration to continue it :) Thank you one more time!

AAHAHAHAAHHAAHHAH THISSSSS SHOUULDDD HAVEEEE MOOREEEEEE

OOOHH DEAAARRR LOOORDDDD LEEE PAACEE ISSSSS THE BAEEE

I loved this. Seriously truthfully adored this. Though... I did have a moment where I thought she might need to stand on a box to kiss him, hehehe. Lee's just so tall! I'm favoriting this. Can't help it. It just makes me want to watch the movie all over again!

THIS WAS SO GOOD OMG

I know it's extremely late to be reviewing this but it was so good oh my gosh

If you ever update you definitely have a fan!

...I'm just stunned. I finished the movie for the first time, not more than a few minutes ago, then stumbled upon your little story and...that was beautiful, superb. You are a very talented writer, and you depicted Alexandria and Roy perfectly. I hope you continue to write in whatever else catches your imagination!

Oh wow this is so beautiful! You literally just put into words how I always imagined (and hoped) Alexandria and Roy would meet again. Thank you for such a heart-warming story, and if you ever decide to continue with it I'll be one of the first to read!

Please continue! It's great

Oh my god this is absolutely perfect! I am in love with this story!

Beautiful! Absolutely as beautiful and touching as the movie. It would be nice if you could continue the story of them a bit...perhaps through time. The 30's: jazz, prohibition. The 40's: war & more loss. The 50's: Rock 'n' Roll, baby!

I think it would have to end there because Roy would be very old. Perhaps a final meeting in a rest home where Roy could tell Alexandria the Great a final tale of The Red Bandit and his Little Bandit.

Just a few ideas to percolate on...but this meeting was beautifully written and a nice bit of closure. Thank you for sharing it with us...

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Wow, I feel like I could cry, but a bitter-sweet cry. I saw The Fall the other day and completely loved it, a very beautiful film. Your story is beautiful too. It didn't feel forced or like an add-on to the movie at all, I truly believe this could easily have happened to them. I see it's been a while since you wrote this but I'd love you to continue it or write another one. Please? This was so perfect. Thank you.

That was beautiful. Thank you. And it fitted really well. I've come up with so many realities that happened to Roy after Alexandria saw him in that one film (and most of them were pretty morbid) but I think I'll stick with this one now.

This is beautiful. the iddea of herbeing able to change the ending of the story now is so lovely and inspiring. great job.