Havn't finished the story yet, but at the mention of hopelessness and stuff like that I always see myself just putting on a huge cocky grin and be like "Bye!" Running out the door. Idk, it could be the fact I read stuff like this at 11 pm that things like that run through my mind

STUNNING CHAPTER AS EXPECTED :)

I actually teared up a bit omg great job !

nice. love it

I love how similar Jack and Edmund are.

My gosh... you are a brilliant writer. Seriously. Your prose is a gentle yet commanding as Susan herself. Bravo. On to the next story!

Go Susan!

I'm glad you wrote a Bunnymund story. I think Jack and Bunny needed that sort of heart to heart and Susan became a perfect mediator. I love these crossovers! You have created something very original and beautiful!

These are amazing stories.
I love how Susan corrected both Jack and Bunny. (And I agree with Jack. If she is that good at it...Edmund must be spectacular.)
You capture Susan's character so well. I can actually believe that is she.
A wonderful examination of hope. Thank you.

Have I told you how much I love your writing? Oh, this was magnificent. Yes, I did want to see Bunny, and you captured all the issues I had with him so perfectly - I do love Jack & Bunny getting along, but they have SO MANY issues to work through first, not least the accusation at Easter, and this is by far my favourite take on seeing them start the process. And I loved seeing the Queen in Susan too - Gentle doesn't mean weak indeed! (agree totally with Jack, Edmund must have TERRIFIED opposing nobility/supplicants for the King's Justice - lol they must have prayed for ANY of the other siblings instead, and then regretted it horribly when they worked out all Four are scary, just in different ways). Also? That bit about Bunny loosing hope BECAUSE JACK WASN'T THERE was just, oh that was sublime, I'd never looked at it that way before! Thank you, once again.

You continued it! What a pleasant suprise! I like this one too. Jack and Bunny are great characters. XD Also a great explaination for Hope! :D

i really love it that every time i read your storys i can sit back and just think about every thought you put in it.