| Reviews for Trouble in Paradise |
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Miko Eiko chapter 10 . 7/3 Dios mío me encantó, sobre todo mi querido Rey Mono |
Prisma19 chapter 10 . 5/29 I loved everything about this story. I love seeing how the boys progressively begin to trust and work together. I love how there was a lot of things going on and how their situation became about not just surviving, but also escaping and defeating the bad guys. One of my favorite parts of the story was Damian and his monkeys, especially him naming a monkey Stephanie and interacting with her, which was funny and sweet. Damian being the Monkey King was hilarious and adorable, I smiled so big picturing Damien as a jungle boy. I wish you added a couple more chapters about the boys telling Bruce and Alfred about their adventure and about Jason talking about happened to Bruce and talking to him about his feelings. I also wish there was a chapter about how they all stayed at the manor for awhile and Jason’s reaction to it and what he did during his time there, such as escaping. Even though I felt like the ending could have used more chapters it was a wonderful story. You did an awesome job writing it. Thanks for writing it. |
Jenmoon1 chapter 10 . 12/2/2019 Thanks for finishing it it was a great story |
Potato chip chapter 10 . 9/28/2018 OMG I LOVED THAT IT MADE ME LAUGH AND CRY IT WAS GREAT |
dnsabhjbwihfj chapter 10 . 7/23/2018 Damian the Monkey King is the best. Thing. EVER! |
InsaneRabbit chapter 9 . 4/14/2018 Oh also... DUDE. Damian took a bullet for a MONKEY. That he JUST MET. Damian is... oh my God. Tim and Jason were right... he is a Disney princess. |
InsaneRabbit chapter 10 . 4/14/2018 One word: Woah. Maybe more that one word. It was in character, suspenseful, had an excellent plot, and was humorous. I was laughing for a good three minutes when Damian barged into the facility with a pack of monkeys. So... yay! |
OneAppleLeaf chapter 10 . 8/14/2017 Awwww this is really nice. I like seeing bat brothers getting along like this! XD It's unfortunate Dick has too little to do though, I think for all his crimefighting he'd have to face a situation like this in a hazing fever. Anyway thanks for the story |
DaughterOfWarCHB chapter 10 . 5/21/2017 3 years late! That's a new one...Anyway, I'd say this story was beautifully written and I am almost positive that your writing has gotten even better than this (it HAS been three years) But I applaud the effort and the personality depictions |
Guest chapter 10 . 5/3/2017 I LOVE THIS SO MUCH OMG YOU ARE A GENIOUS |
Scarease chapter 1 . 3/23/2017 Land on a desert Island using they skills to survive if they do not kill one and other especial Jason and Damian with them being the two most violent of the robins. |
Guest chapter 10 . 12/3/2016 Holy shit this was amazing! Much wow very very wow |
Guest chapter 10 . 7/3/2016 Wow. This was just so...AMAZING! The detail was awsome and just wonderful! I couldn't have asked for more. Just, wow. Good job, really. - ) M |
Guest chapter 10 . 4/23/2016 Awww so awesome, loved it |
Guest chapter 10 . 3/7/2016 Awww, this was adorable! |