oh no poor Randy

That was sick just i wish that mr ferrley had some fun with randy ;)

OMG! I loved it!

i cant wait to know is the Bro :D

i love evvy lol ..and god help Ran );

man what the is wrong with stephen ..poor baby Ran...XoXo

oh lord such a sad start but the start of beautiful story i guess XoXo

COULD WE GET A SEQUEL FOCUSING ON HUNTER. HE WAS REAL ENIGMA THROUGHOUT STORY AND SO OOLALA I WANT MORE.

AWESOME! GREAT STORY IDEA. LOVED HOW LOYAL SHAEMUS WAS. THAT'S ONE KILLER KITTY FOR YOU, HE MUST OF JUST SNIFFED RANDY OUT AND GONE WITH THE WIND. THOUT IT WAS GREAT WRITER'SMANSHIP (CAN YOU SAY THAT?). STORY WAS LONG ENOUGH FOR READERS TO GROW ATTACHED TO CHARACTERS AND FEEL EMPATHY FOR THE CHARACTER'S TRIALS AND TRIBULATIONS. KUDOS TO YOU.

Wow! What a story! Randy was put through he'll...an emotional rollercoaster. Had me mentally and emotionally exhausted. But great story though. I loved Hunter in this. In many stories with Randy, he's portrayed as a bad guy. But this story showed him in a very positive way. He really loved Randy...if they weren't cousins, I think they would've been together. Amazing story. Are we gonna get a sequel focusing on Hunter? There's still so much we don't know about him. Again good story...thanks for that.

great ch. I LOVE THIS BROCK ADDITION ..and oh stephen yes u slap him really pretty hard and if u did it again i will make u cough ur soul lol

omg the brother was brock man i luv brock dayum girl u keepin suprise me lol

omg the scense between randy and evvy was really cute and stephen act like a jerk

oh my sweet lord the end was really ...omg awesome job hun

i read this story four time but i was too bitch to leave a review so i will start to read this baby again and i will leave a review i promise...and one more thing can u please tell me who copy ur stories that u delete so i can kick them till death