Oh. Ooof.

"Oh, so this is how it works. Even when you choose me I don't get to keep you."

I am so devastated. In the best possible way.

Noooooooo... Nooo...nononooooooooooooo no no no. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. No. Whyyyyyy... Whyyy...? Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy why why why why why why why... You evil evil author, breaking my heart so!

It is a good kind of weird. And sad with a dash of feels and stuff.

I loved your story and the formatting was really interesting. The plot was completely heart wrenching and I'm not embarrassed to say that it left me in tears. Keep writing!

Just when I thought Eleven and Amy were going to be bloody happy you through that literal curveball at me. Thank you so much. But honestly, that was incredible! Top notch!

i loved this! the parallels were great :)

oh wow I-I don't even know what to say

That is awesome, I love it. Not much of a Amy/Eleven shipper, more Clara/Eleven but that sorta swings it a bit :P really good, really like it.

I usually don't read 11/Amy fanfiction, but I found this on my tumblr dash and it intrigued me. Wonderfully written and such an amazing idea!
Brava )

I am in LOVE with this. Its so clever and amazing and so sad too.
Well done on a brilliant fic, cant fault it.
Beautiful Story :)

OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO AMAZING THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL OH WOW THE WRITING THE PLOT YOU JUST CAPTURED IT ALL PERFECTLY! WOW!

This is the best, most painful thing I've ever read. And even if I'm crying my eyes out, you deserve a big thank you for this fic! Also if you'll ever decide to continue that, maybe with a happy ending, I'll be extremely happy.

wow ok that hurt my heart a bit i must say

Absolutely love it! This story is so lovely, but so sad at the same time!

This is brilliant. I like your writing style and I think you've captured Amy and the Doctor's relationship perfectly. This is so sad, especially when the Doctor says that even though she chose him he won't get to keep her. I love the parallels to the series.
Really, really great. And so sad!