[I finally reviewed this.]

You did a wonderful job on it! I loved your characterizations and the way that she worries about Charlie. The last exchange of dialogue is perfect, and you have Molly spot-on. I loved your Arthur as well, and the brief appearance of the twins. MollyArthur is adorable. And perfect. And you've captured that wonderfully.

Thank you so much for writing this! And also for the compliment at the beginning. ;) But that's just from practice. I loved this. You're amazing. That's all.

This was perfect.
The Molly/Arthur, the twins missed "send off", "Dragons" as the only way for Molly to express Charlie leaving, the fact that it took place at four in the morning (I don't know why, but that made the whole story more real to me). There were a few commas missing, but otherwise the SPaG was good, and the present tense worked out well. Thanks for this :)
-lame lame & lamer

Aww. How sweet. You portrayed Molly perfectly. She had her spunk, her unwillingness to let go, her love for her family. I enjoyed the use of Arthur's nickname for her (Mollywobbles) and that you didn't overuse it like some do. That last sentence was really the kicker ("I just don't know if *I* will be.") It sums up pretty much the whole drabble, if you read it in context. The only critique I have is on these sentences...
"You're right. I'm being silly. He'll be fine."
It seems kind of choppy. I would suggest commas or a semicolon somewhere.
Great job! -Kit Kat

I really enjoyed this. It was sweet and a very cute way of addressing something that I'm sure all parents struggle to deal with. Charlie leaving home would surely be a very difficult and emotional experience.

I think you did a really good job of capturing the sweet and caring nature of Molly and Arthur's relationship. They were very in character and I could vividly imagine the scene in my head the entire time! Little touches like Arthur calling Molly, Mollywobbles, really added to the feel of the fic. I also thought your ending line was wonderful and really summed it all up quite well. :)

Very well done!

Really sweet. Keep writing