Cool chapter, and it's interesting that Ryan is back.

please continue this, its really good. like how you brought Ryan back form the dead you should bring in fontaine. but most importantly SAVE THIS STORY.

Heads up, your formatting is a bit off. Might want to look into fixing that.

Have you noticed how almost all of your paragraphs are the same length in this chapter.

Awesome chapters! :)

I like chapters like this. Lots of content, action and mysteries .
Only one thing bothers me. Why Cohen was in elevator with some random dude and also with Slenderman! I understand that multiuniverse theory would quite nicely fit him,but still... That was creepy and unexpected.

yeah good update. the crow scene reminded me of the part in resident evil 6 where you had to avoid glowing bugs to avoid a giant guy with a drill hand. too bad mitchell had to die early though I liked him. also who was the blue suited guy. and my favorite horror movie would be cabin in the woods.

please update sooner its as good as adazm :[

does sander cohen want elizabeth so he could turn her all fucked up like him

to tell you the truth I would like the big sister romance but it would probably be better if all the big sisters would want to romance delta.

I love this story please continue

this was good I love all that is going between columbia vs rapture very good and songbird vs omega

Hey your back! Awesome!

F*** Yeah! I've been waiting for this one to update! Can't wait for more, so excited.

Dead space(inspiration)!