| Reviews for Bits of Sunshine |
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YeTianshi chapter 10 . 7/24 Elena doesn't actually come off too bad the way you write her, she seems true to her character. And while she does have her "moments", where the reader just sort of wants to throw a tomato at her, she also has some very nice sweet bonding moments with Clarissa. I do wish they'd have more of those, but eh. |
DawnScarlet19610 chapter 30 . 7/24 This is an incredible story. You are a fantastic writer and I'm so glad I came across your fic. I will admit, however, that I was disappointed with how things went during the Vampire Council meeting. Clary should have waited for that until she wasn't messed up emotionally because it would have been great if she had taken over the council in a brilliant fae-like way. I felt like she came across as super unstable and childish, especially when Jenna showed up and smacked her down in front of all the adults. That really wasn't how I was hoping that would go. As for your fae creation, it's definitely interesting. I really hope Clary would become half-vampire and half-fae simply because her powers are pretty lame as a half-fae. Her ability to influence others massively pales in comparison to vampire compulsion, she can be uninvited from houses whereas vampires can't, she has no super strength or speed like vampires do, fae heel way slower than vampires and don't even have the power to heel others like vampire blood can do, and she can't control animals either... If I had a choice, I'd definitely be a vampire over a faerie. Vampires are so much more powerful than anything you've shown Clary to be able to do. Full fae seem more powerful, but Clary doesn't seem to be able to do anything like that. I wish her powers would be explored more. I love her and Damon's relationship. It's so sweet and beautiful. I hope things start to move on a bit with less chapters dedicated to fluff, although I'm not sure you'll ever be finishing. Anyways, thank you for the great read! I hope you come back one day. |
Bookworm1611 chapter 28 . 7/18 That had to be a Doctor Who reference |
Bookworm1611 chapter 16 . 7/15 Definitely Fae, she could have been a pixie of some sort but now I'm sensing fae. Clarissa, you're a fairy. |
Shadow jade Phoenix chapter 12 . 7/6 Does this bar actually exists I really want to go. |
Shadow jade Phoenix chapter 3 . 7/5 Thank you so much! I found a zombie killing shirt and I love it! |
carlapaz.astroza chapter 30 . 6/27 Cant wait for the new chapterrr :) |
CaseyIGuess chapter 16 . 6/20 Hey! So I know its been a while since you posted this story, but just wanted to say I've been re reading this over and over and its still amazing! Hope everything is okay in life and be safe! Xx |
TimeLady98 chapter 1 . 6/5 This has been honestly one of my favorite fan fictions for a while, this will now be my third time re-reading it! |
Katty007 chapter 1 . 6/2 You have been hinting around the Teen Wolf universe as well as the Supernatural universe are they going to be a bigger part of the story later on? |
avidreader00 chapter 1 . 6/1 I really do hope you come back to this story! I reread it every year, okay more like I read it three times a year but I just can’t help it. This is so freaking fantastic and I just can’t get enough of clary and Damon together. |
Ignorantly-apathetic chapter 23 . 6/1 Ooo love how the plot thickened with Nate's story. Fricking love it :D |
Ignorantly-apathetic chapter 16 . 6/1 Clarissa is totally a faery. I'm calling it right now! I'm so excited to see what happens next :DDD |
crazed828 chapter 30 . 5/16 I'm kinda bummed that it's been 6 years since this Fic was updated. I haven't laughed so hard in years. |
Charlie0925 chapter 30 . 5/15 It has to be said, you are by far one of THE BEST writers I have ever, ever had the pleasure of reading! THANK YOU for sharing this story with us all! Hope that life is treating you kindly & that you are a happy clam! ;o) |