I would like you to continue Please.

did you haver thought of making this fanfiction but AkuRoku?

Love it, Feel sorry for Roxas for hearing his brother but that was still funny

Oh man thats the best smut ive ever read . LET'S MAKE THE PART TWO SOON K! C;

Dominant Riku is the best! ;) cant wait for part 2!

Awwwwwwww:) How adorable The whole way through I imagined Sora with cat ears xD Don't ask me why lol.

Oh yeah and PART TWO! :D

Loved it! So sexy and cuteeeeeee! *fangirl squeel* Part 2 Part 2! :3

ow i want the second part *w*

Oh my gosh! HAHAHAHA This was so funny, well mostly the ending was, but I can't help but wonder if Axel is going to tease them for a while. Since they were so loud, or if he'd try to beat them.

One of the best Riku x Sora storys ever. Can't wait for the Roxas x Axel part if you do it... XD Keep it up.

Loved it for so many reasons... One of them was the fact that Riku stopped as soon as he thought Sora wasn't enjoying it. So cute 3 Also, I SO want the sequel! Please do it!

Oh... Oh my god... This was one of the finest smut fics I've read read in a long time. Absolutely beautiful and completely entrancing. Dominant Riku... ;3 takes my breath away. Very well written, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff!

*Blushes* Meep... o/o

Probably the ONLY story I read that made Roxas the younger twin like how it supposed to be! And yes that is the first thing I've noticed lol.
Anyway, nice story here :)

9k word oneshot... I have this little something I started a week before halloween last year. I'd wanted to post it on the 31st, only problem is that it's something that spans 7 days. Day 1 isn't quite finished yet (still―shame on me, I haven't been working on it) and is so far over 7k words... Definitely know how oneshots can get away! WtHB kinda pulled a full prison break.

Anyway! This was somewhat awesome. I especially loved that even Axel could hear―from over the phone, on *the other side of the house*!

And Rox should have seriously added, "Also? Never have sex with our parents anywhere around. You'd probably be grounded. Like, for life." Hah.

Ah yes, and do please share that little sequel, there!

(As for slight negative critique... Well, just basics of "practice [writing style] makes perfect." Overall not too bad, and no less enjoyable... unlike darn touchpad keyboards that often make you misspell even simple words :O gr arg.)