I admit it made me laugh. It's no doubt witty.
But I can't even with the comments on this story.

Obviously the Bro Code is an important veil indeed. But everyone needs to slow the fucc down man. To justify that Kanji had his eyes first was ok, but to ran straight to say she's his girl is just crossing the line. Naoto's her own girl, she owns herself. No Chad MC or a boy crush who sets his eyes first is gonna change that fact. Not to mention this story's quite one sided and not enough to justify the real deal, here the author set the MC as making moves on her due to social links rank and mere sex attraction, what would be a greater case to point out chances of Kanji being better would be if you'd actually portray them as equals, meaning what if souji really do have genuine feelings for Naoto? Surely a more definitive suggestion can be made other than a rather important code. If that were the case, they should both be given a chance. (hasn't anime taught you anything?)

That being said, I as reader do have respect for the writer and the story itself. I laughed most part and was quite satisfied except for the Kanji's girl part. Regardless, job well done.

I like this one-shot and I like that the Devil-Souji became serious when Yosuke told him the three words.

HAH, even Devil Souji agrees! Lol

After reading your other oneshot Wedding Dress (which broke my heart and made me cry by the way, so kudos to you), reading this one did wonders for my still-recovering heart. I love this piece because it ties in with Wedding Dress in a humorous way and addresses some of the issues I've always had with the NaotoxMC pairing. I'm fine with other people shipping it because it's up to their own opinion, but I could never do it because its obvious Kanji really likes her beyond just a crush (and even more heartbreaking that he doesn't complain about the MC starting a relationship with Naoto in the game itself). I started cracking up at how you poked fun at some of the gameplay mechanics and how both the devils and angels started whacking the MC for violating the bro code pfft. I'm also a big fan of How I Met Your Mother, so using this as a concept was a huge plus for me! Thanks for writing this!

I too have debate with my -angle and -shadow self about this. My Angle side said the same think. And i began to think about it everyday. I finally made up my mind. Kanji was my bro and bro never break the bro code! Bro forever! so I select:

-Because I love you {

Haha, nice work.

Angel Yosuke was absolutely perfect. I think the internal debate between Angel- and Demon- Souji were also really accurate representations of the dilemma faced by the MC (as well as the player)

... Also, you should consider actually writing about Souji throwing them in a closet. I feel like you would come up with some very interesting dialogue.

You don't break the Bro Code.

Good job, Souji.

Loved it, seeing Souji's psyche and what he should do about Naoto, especially seeing as NaotoXMC IS one of the most popular pairings out there. The fic's pretty good for a one-shot. It made me smile.

Nice job, I would love to see more from you.

Very cute and very funny. Good job. Keep writing.

Oh goodness, I think I nearly lost it when you brought Angel!Yosuke into this. This was just too amazing, and I bow down to you.